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    hey yo this is essential,i got alot of petential,u may think im mental,but my lp is for rental,like 50 cent i need a dental//
    also so have 21 questions,i need some more lessons,on my freestyle sessions,to give good impressions//
    come on girl lets dance,ill give u some entrance,lets kiss like were from france,give me more than just one chance//
    give a chance to prove my trust,if not ill blow like dust,give me a time limit if u must,it aint all about ya bust//
    all i could do was flounder,since the day i found ya//
    now u wont leave me alone,i have another life outside of home,i have the chronic zone,but u dont like it and u change ya tone//
    now im not aloud to be expressed,she didnt like the way i dressed,shes being such a pest,girl give it a rest,im doing my best//
    she wants the most stylish ever shoes,and wants to join the rocafella crew,she wants a threesom so i have to fuck a fella too//
    i need to make a scandal,cos this is too much to handle,gotta strangle her like a bandle//
    no more need to pretend,cos here comes the end,and this girls is still stearing me aruond the bend//

  • #2
    nice spit i was really feelin it

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    • #3
      Eh, nice lyrics, flow was off, it wasnt very creative, but u got good lyrics, i will give u that
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      • #4
        he is takin my style, lol for real, but you aint got the flow yet.. so you gotta work harder to be me
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        • #5
          Alright Dog, I Enjoyed Reading It, That 50 Line Made Me Laugh. U Need To Work On The Flow Though. Keep Elavating, Peace 1...battle.snake

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          • #6
            it was okay
            "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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            • #7
              nice drop
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              • #8
                nice spit man!! u need 2 work up on yo flow tho

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                • #9
                  thanx for telling me wat u think im glad u all liked it

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                  • #10
                    nice spit chucky..gj.
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                    • #11
                      thanx againn finally im on a good site not a shit one like the obietrice forums and 50cent one

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                      • #12
                        it was aight.
                        Bay Area Love
                        Go 49ers
                        Raiders suck

                        N1ggaz bustin shots like they lost they minds
                        Like 25 - Life never crossed they miiiinds
                        -2pac

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                        • #13
                          The words and rhymes were good, but you got to work on you flow a little more. Other than that, it was pretty good.
                          Thanx 2 Drifta 4 the av.

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                          • #14
                            more people rate this for me please

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                            • #15
                              you need to work on structure.... dont stretch your lines like that.. hard on the eyes. needs flow... wasnt all that great at all. but thats better then my freestyles when i was a newbie
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