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  • Trem v.s Coma

    Trem

    check the facts and get back cuz mate ya whack//
    lookin like ya been attacked by my nut sack//
    dick on ya head, piss dribblin down ya back//
    balls on ya chin, words leavin you flat as a thumb tack//
    battelin a virgin, bitch neva gonna get fucked//
    cuz ya cholesterol is the only thing that's up//
    don't front, bitch you fatta than jabba the hutt//
    tellin me to ease off, i'm beatin ya ass with a beat box//
    your shit is worse than spew on the beach, 340 degrees hot//
    faggot you smell worse than ten fat shawties and three socks//
    your punches are piss weak, you a rookie on the leaf tip//
    leaf quick, i'm competin you never concieve this, eat shit//
    if you was a kettle you couldn't heat this, you could never beat this//
    bitch you better cease, this is like war goin against the peace//
    you outta luck, with this verse ya get fucked, let them give their opinions but//
    if you get a vote it's cuz you promised the judges they'd get their dick sucked//


    Coma

    Aite, yo, Mate, why you here//
    Your no rapper, not like me i'm pure//
    Pure skill, not like your shit rhymes//
    I've heard your shit before, like, 80 times//
    The means you use the same shit over and over//
    If YOU get a vote you told the judges to bend over//
    Pr3dat0r had some truth, you like it in the ass//
    You can't spit shit , i smoke you like grass//
    Smoke your lyricial shit like it's nothin//
    You try to act tuff, you a fag you bluffin//
    I can see right threw you, not like you do//
    Whatever, i'll come back and put a bullet in you//
    I"ll leave the keyboard here and type when your ready//
    Fuck Jason cuz it's Coma verus Freddy//
    But whatever, you can have some of my rhymes too//
    But they way you talk, nonobdy wants to be you//


    Vote up
    All through high school i had braids
    I kept mad blades
    Stabbin teachers to death that gave me bad grades - R.I.P Big L.

  • #2
    ima have to vote trem, both weren't that good, but trem had more multies and harder hits, and i liked readin his shit better.. yeah vote trem
    EII
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    • #3
      thanks.. 1 to 0 more votes please.
      All through high school i had braids
      I kept mad blades
      Stabbin teachers to death that gave me bad grades - R.I.P Big L.

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      • #4
        Coma`s was a shitty battle ... so simplistic
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        • #5
          lol.. trem.. but thanks .. 2-0
          All through high school i had braids
          I kept mad blades
          Stabbin teachers to death that gave me bad grades - R.I.P Big L.

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          • #6
            3-0 to me coma.. i got a vote in the name v.s name.. nice battle
            All through high school i had braids
            I kept mad blades
            Stabbin teachers to death that gave me bad grades - R.I.P Big L.

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            • #7
              I got my dick owned, meh



              Trem, you wanna go again for real?
              Last edited by Coma; 04-03-2004, 07:37 AM.
              QUAKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
              LOOK! A CHICKEN!!!(chickensm
              Don't Worry...I Love You (somebulls
              SET FIRE TO APPLES!!! ( Not Green Ones Tho )
              I
              Have A
              Dormi
              Obsession. I
              Need Help

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              • #8
                Fuck a double post.
                Last edited by Booty1icious; 04-03-2004, 07:44 AM.
                What, Just coz I'm a woman, I have less ability?/
                After two bars your screamin, damn girl, your KILLIN me/

                bLaH.

                Don't Look At My Signature.

                PrOinG.

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                • #9
                  WTF Coma? I aint a hater but damn dude..

                  The means you use the same shit over and over//
                  If YOU get a vote you told the judges to bend over//

                  Was that meant to rhyme? Nah you need to work on the punches, multi's, wordplay, structure, and flow.

                  The other one wasn't amazing but it pissed on Coma's. Line that caught my eye the most;

                  battelin a virgin, bitch neva gonna get fucked//
                  cuz ya cholesterol is the only thing that's up//

                  On the serious... Trem had this... but still Trem work on the multi's and flow dude and you'll be straight...

                  Vote; Trem.
                  Last edited by Booty1icious; 04-03-2004, 07:43 AM.
                  What, Just coz I'm a woman, I have less ability?/
                  After two bars your screamin, damn girl, your KILLIN me/

                  bLaH.

                  Don't Look At My Signature.

                  PrOinG.

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                  • #10
                    Yeah man, i know, my rhyme was shit, it was to late to be tryin. THanks for the input tho
                    QUAKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                    LOOK! A CHICKEN!!!(chickensm
                    Don't Worry...I Love You (somebulls
                    SET FIRE TO APPLES!!! ( Not Green Ones Tho )
                    I
                    Have A
                    Dormi
                    Obsession. I
                    Need Help

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                    • #11
                      It's aight though... for real just try and make the lines look about the same size... you'll be straight... just keep practisin..

                      -OnE-
                      What, Just coz I'm a woman, I have less ability?/
                      After two bars your screamin, damn girl, your KILLIN me/

                      bLaH.

                      Don't Look At My Signature.

                      PrOinG.

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                      • #12
                        Need alot of practice eh?
                        QUAKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                        LOOK! A CHICKEN!!!(chickensm
                        Don't Worry...I Love You (somebulls
                        SET FIRE TO APPLES!!! ( Not Green Ones Tho )
                        I
                        Have A
                        Dormi
                        Obsession. I
                        Need Help

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                        • #13
                          lol yeah ya do, just... one real big mistake was you sayin " but whatever " and " whatever" and that shit, plus you don't say that you'll shoot him or whatever, you gotta do what he was doin, callin you names, sayin you fat, sayin you stink like shit.. lol.. yeah.
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                          • #14
                            so alot more punches?
                            QUAKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                            LOOK! A CHICKEN!!!(chickensm
                            Don't Worry...I Love You (somebulls
                            SET FIRE TO APPLES!!! ( Not Green Ones Tho )
                            I
                            Have A
                            Dormi
                            Obsession. I
                            Need Help

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                            • #15
                              basically.. better rhymes as well.. lol.. anyways i'm out for a while
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