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  • 3 New Songs ( 700,000 Reps For Feedback )

    Turn Up The Bass
    No Concept Feat. Jay-B aka FiFTY0550
    Hit Em Right There ( Respone to that one dude )

    http://www.soundclick.com/purelyhiphopdotcom
    www.datpiff.com/profile/seanmcdevitt

  • #2
    wooord.. listen to that track im on.. theres the lyrics if you cant catchm y words wit the slurin. lol.. it isnt that bad this time.. i improved.. lyrics are shit tho.. 3rd song..




    the names jay b, from E.N.T

    where ya from boooy, eastside, in the CT

    height, 6,1 aint no way your stopin me

    talkin shit behind me back cuz your jealous of me

    keep talkin, me, you wish you can be

    N-A-U-G-A-T-U-C-K

    is where you can locate thee

    B double o-t, l-e double g, E.N.T

    if you want it wit the crew, you better bring the guns

    Hoodhop and Jay B, you think your number 1?

    ha, dont front, your about to get punkd

    hands up we just got you wit a squrt guns

    stand up if your ready to go one on one

    man up if you wanna go against me and some

    this isnt my life, but whut the heell its fun

    c o double n, e c t

    i, c u t, dont fuck wit me

    if you ever need shit, jus holla at me

    im that dude that can get chu whut ever you need

    whut up to my fam, chris and pat p

    these lyrics are on a diet, they just fat free

    this shit is attentionaly made for a free

    style, yeah im rappin, who says i wanna be a rapper

    i can make more money, flippin houses faster

    ill destroy your world, just like the day after

    ill put your lights out, faster then the clapper

    you aint my boy yous a punk ass actor

    a fuckin dick rider, sour like cider

    just give me 5 years ill be on top of the game

    after i come out shit will never be the same

    18, and i already got fame to claim

    respect it, cuz E.N.T is whut you shout

    keep my name out your fuckin mouth
    aka Fifty0550

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    • #3
      Hoodhop Wanna Collab?

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      • #4
        yes he did improve lol

        this verse you did was really good.. i liked...
        www.datpiff.com/profile/seanmcdevitt

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        • #5
          Ill check out the top song(no concept)since im in a hurry.

          Ok beat coming in.Bit club style.First guy comes in.The flow is good.Lyrics are ok,heard better.Not a bad verse.

          No chorus.

          Next guy comes in.Has strong mic presence,feeling quite comfortable with the beat.Riding it well.

          Its not a bad track,so keep reppin your ends.

          Holla at your bro.
          Last edited by Apathy; 03-30-2006, 02:35 PM.
          Ready to pop you like the cork and wine
          Ready to pop you like the cherry on a gorgeous dime

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          • #6
            Originally posted by |Z|FLOW
            Hoodhop Wanna Collab?
            yeah sure.. ill check yer songs out now..
            AIM-eastdport
            www.datpiff.com/profile/seanmcdevitt

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            • #7
              Check Out 'Soon You'll Understand' N Im Nearly Finished Anutha Track....
              http://board.rapbasement.com/showthread.php?t=297737

              Wanna Spit Over Immortal Tech's 'The Point Of No Return' Beat?
              If Ya Do Ge At Me N Ill Upload It 4 Ya.......

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              • #8
                ima take a break from rappin for a while but yeah ill do it in the future
                www.datpiff.com/profile/seanmcdevitt

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                • #9
                  The song with Jay b, is fire son..

                  No homo.

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                  • #10
                    and the others artn>lol jk

                    thanks man
                    www.datpiff.com/profile/seanmcdevitt

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                    • #11
                      No but Im Pat P, the kid he gives a shout out too, thats why i Said it ******.

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                      • #12
                        yeah i know he told me lol^
                        www.datpiff.com/profile/seanmcdevitt

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                        • #13
                          No Concept was a tight track nice lyrics man I liked ur rhymes u had good control over ur breathin sum rappers even professionals breathe heavy like sumthing up their ass, ur flow was tops da spit was tight, Jay-B's spit was good too but I was feelin' Hoodhop's more but over all nice drop man 9/10

                          Turn Up The Bass-wasnt liking da beat much but ur performance was good man da flow was good lyrics were nice I liked da concept 8/10

                          Hit Em Right There - I liked da beat on dat wasnt really feelin' da message ur bringing but once again ur performance was good man I can finally download sumthing dats worth downloadin from soundlick hot drops man keep it up
                          Southern Intellect

                          Its The Southern TakeOver
                          Cruz

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                          • #14
                            thanks for checkin it out.. let me know whut i need to improve on..
                            aka Fifty0550

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                            • #15
                              I think you both should add some Multi-sylabble's to your rhymes.Lyrically you can add more metaphors,puns and even more wordplay.Try and be witty.

                              Listen to all the underground rappers and learn from their rhyme schemes.THats the best way to go forward.Also try mixing up the flow a bit.I can see you both flow good.Now its time to experiment with differents beats and stuff,its all good cause you're not exactly selling tracks yet so experimenting's great elevation.

                              Peace.
                              Ready to pop you like the cork and wine
                              Ready to pop you like the cherry on a gorgeous dime

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