***Joyride by MASSACRE***

[Massacre]

I'm waitin for "slim_08_shady" to spit onthe 3rd verse but I thought I'd post my 2 verses cuz they're sick as hell. Feed is appreciated.
l\/l***MASSACRE***l\/l

lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=3721754&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=3721754&q=hi

[Massacre]

anyone........?

[2Nice]

needs a better flow + chorus, but not bad

[Massacre]

thanx, repped

[Khalil]

Hey man, thanks for the feed on my track, I am here to return the favor.

The beat is pretty good, got a "joyride" typa vibe to it.

I like the vibe of the track, the content of the hook I wasnt really feeling, but the flow to it was coo.

Your lyrics were decent, flow needs some work, but its not that bad.

Overall, an aight track, some better lyrics in some parts and more polished flow and its a good track. Keep at it.

[2Nice]

thanx, repped

no you didn't! (arguingsm

[Massacre]

oops..now i did