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  • new netcee... My first time using sound click.. peep my shit and give advice

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=521584
    give me adivice on how to work on my rap... and ill give you what little rep i can give... thanx in advance

    this first song is called... who murdered rap?
    and if you have time comment on jacking of the chemist...

    if you leave feed back, give me a link to your thread so that I can leave feed back for you.
    Last edited by Dr Ho daddy SWO; 04-08-2006, 09:12 AM.
    New old song of mine Dedicated
    Dedicated

  • #2
    Beat's good, Lyrics arent bad and the flow's good. But when you do the chorus I think you should make it sound a lil different than your verses, cuz like in the 1st verse it just blends in. Over all I think it's a pretty good song though. Check my shit out, link's in my sig.
    l\/l***MASSACRE***l\/l
    "In the end we're all just chalk lines on the concrete, drawn only to be washed away..." - FFDP

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Massacre
      Beat's good, Lyrics arent bad and the flow's good. But when you do the chorus I think you should make it sound a lil different than your verses, cuz like in the 1st verse it just blends in. Over all I think it's a pretty good song though. Check my shit out, link's in my sig.
      l\/l***MASSACRE***l\/l
      cool, I'll add some shit to the corus... repped

      ill check out your shit too.

      do you have a thread where I can leave a comment?
      New old song of mine Dedicated
      Dedicated

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      • #4
        nah i dont have a thread but just pm me or whatever
        "In the end we're all just chalk lines on the concrete, drawn only to be washed away..." - FFDP

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        • #5
          got sum tight tracks, like the chorus on 'who murdered rap'

          http://board.rapbasement.com/showthread.php?t=297974
          (W) RIP Big Proof (W)
          My SoundClick/My Space

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          • #6
            i like your flow man
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            • #7
              i also liked the chorus to "who murdered rap". the flow and lyrics were also tight.
              i liked "jacking of the chemist" too. flow and lyrics are good
              Check out my music:
              http://www.myspace.com/CarlGN

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              • #8
                im likin your tracks man... you got a sick flow on who murdered rap.... the beat doesnt compliment your flow on in in my opinion though.. but its a hot track none-the-less

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                • #9
                  i listened to both

                  who murdered rap? Ft. Karim.. sounds like a good battle rapper..
                  Jacking of the chemist... tryin to think of this beat? young buck?... the flows arnt bad.. sounds like some Detriot shit..

                  good music
                  www.datpiff.com/profile/seanmcdevitt

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by hoodhop
                    i listened to both

                    who murdered rap? Ft. Karim.. sounds like a good battle rapper..
                    Jacking of the chemist... tryin to think of this beat? young buck?... the flows arnt bad.. sounds like some Detriot shit..

                    good music

                    jacking the chemist beat is made by the alchemist... hence jacking the chemist cuz i jacked his beat... (don't sue).

                    thanx for the feed.
                    New old song of mine Dedicated
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