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  • Sorry B [ Major Reps For Feed, I've Improved ALOT ]

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=3785557

    I know when i'm talkin i sound gay as fuck, it was an idea one of my friends have n it didnt work out but that dont matter right now.
    OH HAI!

  • #2
    iight listenin

    You english? Ya flow is ok but delivery could be improved......I like tha beat mayne.....lyrics are ok....

    o/a decent track

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    • #3
      to tell u the truth I couldn't understand a word u were sayin lol. I liked the beat. I seen so much room for improvement though. I could see alot more done with the piano. Decent track, bad voice.

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      • #4
        lol, its somethin to do with my accent, alot of people cant understand me, i try to sorta hide it but it dunt work
        OH HAI!

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        • #5
          U Have the only Accent like one of them Guys from the Getaway but the FLow was good lyrics i could say were alright i had to listen closely to understand what u were saying but good overall the hook was catchy. even dough i didn't understand what u was saying.~1~

          P.S Lyrics would be Nice!!! don't Forget to Rep

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          • #6
            lol thanks man, i wont forget to rep either, i'm gonna work harder on tryna hide my accent
            OH HAI!

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            • #7
              yeah the voice got on me, even though im english! I can understand what you on about though in the song. But your flows is fine, i can see you improving with the voice
              http://www.myspace.com/ferociousproductions


              slit your Guttural, like a butter roll
              blood will flood a pool, fuck your slut, nut in her hole..

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              • #8
                Next Time just try to find the Right Beat to flow with ur Accent and ull be fine~1~

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                • #9
                  You coming in.Your flows actually ok.The accent is a bit annoying but this is sounding tight with a bit of switchingup here and there.Your flow is a bit simplistic and your lyrics too,but work on it and you will have a tight sound.Chorus isnt bad.Second+Third verse is reasonable,seems a bit more confident.Maybe you can UP your emotion too although this is a 'quieter type track'.

                  Not bad,but theres a lot that can be done with your sound if you put your mind to it.

                  Peace.
                  Ready to pop you like the cork and wine
                  Ready to pop you like the cherry on a gorgeous dime

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                  • #10
                    bumpity
                    Ready to pop you like the cork and wine
                    Ready to pop you like the cherry on a gorgeous dime

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                    • #11
                      yo did improved bro i'd say this is a very good work
                      keep doin' it
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                      Yung Murda - Mudlark - Ruffneck
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                      • #12
                        thanks everyone, i'm takin all this in.
                        OH HAI!

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                        • #13
                          im liking the beat, but yeah its hard to understand what your syaing, but just listening, it sounds like your flowin pretty good. we can't really expect you to change your accent, so good shit.
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                          • #14
                            ^ thanks man n ima try to like "hide" it coz if i try to do that eventully after doin enough tracks it'll just sound normal
                            OH HAI!

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                            • #15
                              ur lyrics were tight as a mutha fucka but just as every1 said man hide dat accent
                              coz ur lyrics r hot man I dig it, remind me of eminem who knows u might be da next best artist 2 put da pen 2 da page
                              ur hook wasnt da best it was catchy and all but I dont kno I felt like u lost da flow in da hook
                              just a tip u should stick 2 eminem kinda beats, sad but da same aggressive and violent u get me? it suits u trust Cruz homey

                              dis track overall I give it 9/10 if ur accent was hidden it would 10/10 nice drop man
                              Southern Intellect

                              Its The Southern TakeOver
                              Cruz

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