My First Full Instrumental

[Depth]

I've been fucking around with beats for about a month, but really havent done anything with it. Anyways i found this sample today and liked it, so i just spend about an hour and a half fucking with it. Its nothing special, ill be the first to admit that, but i would like some positive feedback on what i can do to improve, thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/depthcan

[La Potencia]

Wow i didn't like the Beat at all but i still give u propz for the Fact that u made a beat cuze i tried and it's FUKKing HARD to make beats Keep at it~1~P.S. That 24 second beat u made i personally think it was better than this one.

[Street_Revolva]

I'm likin it man..Could've added a lil sumthin to the drums and extended the bassline a bit..but overall its good.

Propz bro

[Massacre]

I don't like it, It's not really a beat it's more of the skeleton of a beat. It need work, add more to it. Check out my beat page, the link is in my signature.
l\/l***MASSACRE***l\/l

[Depth]

thanks for the comments, all repped

[2Nice]

There o....k..... sounds like u were just fuckin around though.

[Depth]

just added a new song, Good Feel. check it out and feedback, reps will follow of course.

2-nice, you right now it is just me fucking around, almost done university for the year so maybe this summer ill take some time and actualy work a beat for more then a few hours

[2Nice]

again, just fuckin around lol

[kazman]

just added a new song, Good Feel. check it out and feedback, reps will follow of course.
2-nice, you right now it is just me fucking around, almost done university for the year so maybe this summer ill take some time and actualy work a beat for more then a few hours

That sounds like some little mermaid type shit lol.


You need detail and need to learn how to not sound repetitive.