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    I've been fucking around with beats for about a month, but really havent done anything with it. Anyways i found this sample today and liked it, so i just spend about an hour and a half fucking with it. Its nothing special, ill be the first to admit that, but i would like some positive feedback on what i can do to improve, thanks

    http://www.soundclick.com/depthcan
    If I can kick drugs, I can deliver a baby

    Charlie RIP
    LOST

  • #2
    Wow i didn't like the Beat at all but i still give u propz for the Fact that u made a beat cuze i tried and it's FUKKing HARD to make beats Keep at it~1~P.S. That 24 second beat u made i personally think it was better than this one.

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    • #3
      I'm likin it man..Could've added a lil sumthin to the drums and extended the bassline a bit..but overall its good.

      Propz bro

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      • #4
        I don't like it, It's not really a beat it's more of the skeleton of a beat. It need work, add more to it. Check out my beat page, the link is in my signature.
        l\/l***MASSACRE***l\/l
        "In the end we're all just chalk lines on the concrete, drawn only to be washed away..." - FFDP

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        • #5
          thanks for the comments, all repped
          If I can kick drugs, I can deliver a baby

          Charlie RIP
          LOST

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          • #6
            There o....k..... sounds like u were just fuckin around though.

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            • #7
              just added a new song, Good Feel. check it out and feedback, reps will follow of course.

              2-nice, you right now it is just me fucking around, almost done university for the year so maybe this summer ill take some time and actualy work a beat for more then a few hours
              If I can kick drugs, I can deliver a baby

              Charlie RIP
              LOST

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              • #8
                again, just fuckin around lol

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Depth
                  just added a new song, Good Feel. check it out and feedback, reps will follow of course.
                  2-nice, you right now it is just me fucking around, almost done university for the year so maybe this summer ill take some time and actualy work a beat for more then a few hours

                  That sounds like some little mermaid type shit lol.


                  You need detail and need to learn how to not sound repetitive.
                  www.soundclick.com/kazproductions
                  www.twitter.com/lukaz09

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