New track - Tha Deep End(reps 4 feed)

[zodiakk]

www.myspace.com/zodiakkilla

this the deep end, located where the killaz known to kick it
rip it in tha chypher call it syncranized spittin
in the deep end, verticly submerged in words
beserk on top of my flow as i surf the verse,

i murk
any mother fucker that be steppin to this
u herbs
sound like any other cat that reppin they shit
repetative shallow rhymes rep the street wit battle lines
but deep down inside the truth is that they sweet like valantines
ya see i analize habits of these rappers
what makes em click, what makes em rich,
what makes em snitch, what makes em bitch

some ppl say i lost my sanity im better of dead
but i gotta be out my mind so i can get in ya head
manipulate ya mindstate intigrate my influence
repair the damaged brain cells eliminate the ignorance
restore ya naturual ability to differentiate
between good and bad ill and wack but will that mend the break
now adays all we be hearin bout is gunz and dimes
why the fuck you makin albums with ya one track minds
ya aint belivin me its all good cuz it seems to me
im gettin on ya nerves so ya must be ya feelin me(readsmili

[DoubleU]

I like this, especially your style and delivery.

[Rac]

i feel like you try to fit in to much
unless it was done on purpose cause it is kinda dope

nice and short

[F2theN]

There's somthing about your voice.

Please don't be offended...

You sound like a realy white guy trying to not sound really white. Just not natural.

Maybe if you mastered your vocals better or had a better mic it would sound much nicer. I'm not sure what the cause is, but somthing is slightly off.

Kinda cool rhyme patterns though. Keep it up.

[mosh_master]

Yeah, this was cool. Beat was nice, and your vocals were mixed pretty well with the beat. Your emotion was a little off sometimes... Could put a bit more feeling into it, ya know? Lyrics were alright, and the hook wasn't that bad.
Overall, this would be a nice underground track. Keep it up.