D-MenTed - Get loose

[noone]

Tell me whut yall think new Track off my EP

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5020215

[noone]

uppin

[noone]

Upping

[AK]

my speakers just caught on fire

[noone]

lol sorry about that my Friend

[C-Jay]

OH OH OH I WANNA HEAR WAIT 2 mins

[C-Jay]

AHHHH not my thing man sorry

[noone]

lol iite

[Cardinal 7]

I actually liked this shit. The beat is sick with it. You got some nice multis & a good voice. My only thing is, I thought you fell off beat at some parts and I wasn't really feelin' the chorus. Other than that, the song is real nice pimp. 8/10

Can you return the favor http://board.rapbasement.com/showthread.php?t=354190

[noone]

thanks FAm yea i got u i well return the favor uppin this

[noone]

uppin

[Mystery]

tracks aight still. nice beat. u kinda sound a bit like u got a southern twang but not fully. i like the line bout ak aka blown ur brains out. more 4 the ak aka part tho

u sound a lil like sum1 cant figure out who tho

[noone]

thanks for the feed uppin

[Natcap(7Notes)]

funny, the last crit I gave just now the guy had no swag. You got tons and you're not using it enough. You need to up your vox a tiny bit, but your adlibs and everything is mixed real well. Your fell off only once or twice, sounded like breath control problems. Make sure you're rapping out loud when you write.

also, work on your closers. I noticed you closed your verses a little weak so it made the hook come in less impressively. the hook wasn't much to be impressed about but it served the exact purpose it needed to on this beat.


nat

[Massacre]

I wasn't feelin this track too much...flow was good but it did get off beat a lil at parts...I didn't like the chorus the most. No hate though