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  • Probable Cause - Take It All Away

    Code:
    http://www.sendspace.com/file/lntihm
    My friend and I are recording an EP, this is supposed to be the intro. May rework some things but you get the gist of it. Would love some feedback.

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    No. You owe me a rep. Liar.
    Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
    New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
    Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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    • #3
      Would love a streaming link.
      I rap.

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      • #4
        Sounds like you guys are talking. Can barely hear some words.

        3rd line of first verse "you cant entertain a thought" sounds funny pronunciation-wise

        flow could use some work on first verse, fell off beat in a few spots

        2nd verse was much better overall

        cool lyrics/rhymes,sounds very atmosphere-ish.. speak up next time you record, get some bass in your voice.
        I rap.

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