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  • another song to sleep on

    67th jerk.mp3 - 2.16MB
    drop links and ill return feed
    I rap.

  • #2
    not feeling the timing until 0.39 to 0.44 I think that tempo of your verse fits you best

    nothing about it really stood out to me because the beat drowns you out in my opinion

    I think you need more animation for this beat

    as far as content goes I would work on the delivery
    To have all Ones Wishes your Hearts Desire

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    • #3
      thanks for checkin it
      I rap.

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