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  • New song - Whaleface (Reintroduction)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cx2tA9b7Wbk

    Written and recorded today... on 02.07.01 I wrote my first rhyme, so I figured I should put out something new today...

    Feedback appreciated as always. This and others up at http://www.soundclick.com/whiteyanderson
    Peep out my new track - "Whaleface (Reintroduction)"

    L O S T

  • #2
    I liked the lyrics...but something about it sounded off to me...I think it could be how your voice and the beat are...I don't think they meshed very well.

    The flow was pretty good, delivery could be worked on but there was emotion.

    Reminded me of Cage a little bit tbh.
    Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
    New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
    Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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    • #3
      Yeah I felt the same, everything sounded great seperately just didnt mesh well for a final product.
      50 droppin, Em droppin, D12 droppin, Dre droppin.. Up In Smoke 2

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      • #4
        that's how i felt too but I thought your flow was impressive, lyrics went over my head tbh

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        • #5
          Rly appreciate the listens & comments. Yeah, the voice was something I was wondering about, & the criticism's always helpful. Would it have sounded better if I was more laid back, or just used a different type of beat all together? Gotta spread some reps around... I shall return
          Peep out my new track - "Whaleface (Reintroduction)"

          L O S T

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          • #6
            I think the punches/kinda haphazard style really fits the beat (great original song too). Very impressed, didn't even know you rapped. Check your reps mate.

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            • #7
              Appreciate the reps mang, but I got a song out there with 16 views and 0 comments
              First verse is done in auto-tune so I get that some people might turn that shit right off but I did the second verse and I wanna know if I brought dat HEAT!
              50 droppin, Em droppin, D12 droppin, Dre droppin.. Up In Smoke 2

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              • #8
                ***** u sound liyke y mad cuz ur boyfrind lef u ugly ass

                dis song sux
                I GOT ALL DA ANSWERS N PRIVITE DANCERS IM LIL MONANZA N IM HOTTER DEN CANCER

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