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    ive walked a thousand miles but it seems ive been gone for a lil while/
    it started way back wen i was a child how my life just brings me smiles/
    i grew up bein an hostile man had more "cases" on me than "x-files"/
    its like at age 12 my mind went wild and suddendly me and skills compiled/
    my head would ache from all the spits i tried to make it seemed soon my heart would break/
    as i take a stake and shove it in me hopefully get in a coma and never wake/
    as i shake and bake and my rhymes quake its no mistake im a future star in the makes/
    growin up with no skills hard to just chill thinkin of rhymes that would give a chill/
    but everytime i try and spill shit it seemed i couldnt get passed the courses and easiest drills/
    so i dont know how i made it this far with my mind so spectacular/
    so dont take my rhymes for kiddie shit take it as a vernacular

    growin up with no skills not whippin doller bills\
    all the drills in front of me always given me chills\
    i overcame this shit and started playin with it\
    now look at me i got talent and now im stayin with it/

    waken up late nights turn on my light and write spits that came into sight/
    to make things right to my delight it seemed to everyone my lyrics would excite/
    so im here to invite all of the impolite cats who fight....to show we should unite/
    not as no country but as nation aceptin you if you chineze, black, cuban or asian/
    hopen to hear our shit on the radio station cause my frustration was goin crazy with no explanation/
    so to my fascination on my graduation day without hesitation i heard it and gave me relaxation/
    so to all you haten debaten rapen psychopathics heres my presentation/
    not to start no operation but its past regulation gime me the ball and lets start this isolation/
    im sick of people who drop spits thinkin they hot but they really not/
    but im here to tell yall sumtin off my mind spot to show you a lil piece that i got/
    o wait shit no i forgot dont mean to spoil your patience but i got an aftershock/
    and it seems for me to go back on stock and block all you fakes at my door that knock/
    askin for opinions wen you really dont need em shoulda stoped from the beginning/
    shit my brain is spinning and is thinning as im grinning my teeth cause i keep on winning

    (chorous)
    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

  • #2
    9/10, nice

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    • #3
      thnx homie.........uppin this....
      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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      • #4
        yeah that's shit's tight. I like it. expecially the chorus I liked how you worked it I thought it was smooth mos def could see that on a mix tape. you ain't no rookie you got 2.153 post. ha! good shit though man. I give it a 8.7/10. You check my newest response to ShawdowML look how I ripped dude.
        7Digit
        UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

        You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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        • #5
          thnx homie for the feed...........and ya ill check urs out...........uppin this..


          wait whats the thread called rick?..............uppin
          ~Lyrical Bloodz~





          when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
          the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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          • #6
            rediculous rick the fagget.
            7Digit
            UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

            You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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            • #7
              o ya i read that shit i know you ripped him but ill go leave feed in it now............uppin this...
              ~Lyrical Bloodz~





              when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
              the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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              • #8
                ya flow needs some work, n u should try convayin ur message more than rhymin words, cuz onece u just think about rhymin words more than what u sayin, the message is lost.
                othawise, it was pretty good, keep it up and work on that shit
                I LOVE MY *BabyTigger*



                - Tigg
                aka: NewPorT

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                • #9
                  thnx 4 the feed and advice homie.......uppin this...
                  ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                  when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                  the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                  • #10
                    nice i like
                    Fo` REAL

                    LIL .M. DJMC

                    22 5


                    touneyz won: 2

                    Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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                    • #11
                      thnx homie.........uppin this....
                      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                      • #12
                        nice shit yo, 9/10

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