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  • My Choice (Last Spit For A While Can Yall Please Give Feed On Last? Feed=Rep)

    yo time to spit words that just bounce off the wall and hit em where it counts/
    just use an ounce of my skill to pounce on them so my name they cant pronounce/
    my love for this game has taken over my brain and has gotten me strangely insane/
    no point to complain as long as my name ends up like stars in hall of fames/
    so im writen my last spit for awhile to show you fuckers that alex is through/
    i dont mean to do this just think its right that i kome bak like mase wit a hot debut/
    i dont mean to spoil yalls fun but i think its time to kick up my feet and run/
    ive been hot before i begun to write spits off the top and shine like the sun/
    ive been straight with all the feed i get from great spitters who have high rates/
    but as i cross through the country state by state ill put up "numbers" like a "license plate"/
    so just to let yall hear this im not leaven cause of beef theres just no service/
    im an immortal yall could never hurt this but im leaven cause im gettin extra nervous/
    ive been spitten rhymes for a long time and on the way i was watchin how my skills climbed/
    and noticed that wen the my mind unwinds lines of criticism people love em cause they mine/
    it dont matter what i do because people always think what i say that im always playing/
    bloobalasoubacommmasoe just like how people dont give a fuck bout what im saying/
    im alerting peoples minds wen im converting rhymes and my mind neva stops hurting/
    i cant help it that my brains always working always diverting no fuck it im still learning/
    so its time to put this freestylin to the test and put it to rest or at least thats wut i suggest/
    hope there aint no protest as i impress words off my chest with one of the freestyles of my best......




    just to tell yall im gonna try and stop freestylin for awhile so this is gonna be a last spit for awhile.............and i liked to say thnx 2 urban aka given me explanations on how to make my stuff better......so props to him.....but ya im gonna take a break IM NOT leaven the board im just taken a break from freestylin............anyways can i get feedback on my last spit?
    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

  • #2
    Cool rap, dawg. It's a shame that you're gonna stop rapping for a while.
    P!

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    • #3
      thnx 4 feed dawg.......uppin this...
      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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      • #4
        uppin this....
        ~Lyrical Bloodz~





        when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
        the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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        • #5
          safe spit homie
          UNITED KILLA'S
          B.R
          BRITISH
          RUFNEX

          Coco
          B
          rice~Lyrical
          Virus~Skatz~Homicidal
          Grim P

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          • #6
            pretty good dawg, 8.5/10

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            • #7
              thnx 4 feed and coco what you mean by SAFE spit? 1o1 j/wonderin...........uppin this....
              ~Lyrical Bloodz~





              when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
              the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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              • #8
                it's aight, cool
                UNITED KILLA'S
                B.R
                BRITISH
                RUFNEX

                Coco
                B
                rice~Lyrical
                Virus~Skatz~Homicidal
                Grim P

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                • #9
                  o ight 1o1.........uppin this....
                  ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                  when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                  the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                  • #10
                    i think its tighter than......em.......my ass!!!!...lol its noice dawg ...plz dont retire!!!
                    Fo` REAL

                    DeCeaST
                    DJMC
                    lil M




                    Realizez- Infinate Soldier


                    Originally posted by Pawl Derty
                    U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
                    Originally posted by J-Side
                    Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

                    Originally posted by Dirt Rich
                    You definetely got balls

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                    • #11
                      1o1 i aint really retiren im just kinda taken a break from maken so much spits i may do collabs or sumtin sumtimes but very little of em cause i wanna take a break for once 1o1.............thnx 4 feed......uppin this...
                      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                      • #12
                        Good spit dawg ---- Nice flow and word play ---- specially the more number than a license plate I enjoyed it ------ Good luck with whatever your doin bro.
                        RiDeRs Of ThE ApOcAlYpSe

                        ++ThA rEaLeSt>P5YCHO++


                        Follower Of The Freestyle Church

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                        • #13
                          thnx 4 feed..uppin this...
                          ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                          when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                          the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                          • #14
                            Not meanin to sound pushy man but am I gettin a rep for this ---- LOL
                            RiDeRs Of ThE ApOcAlYpSe

                            ++ThA rEaLeSt>P5YCHO++


                            Follower Of The Freestyle Church

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                            • #15
                              o shit my bad 1o1 i 4got 2 give you one i just gave u one now 1o1...........uppin this...
                              ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                              when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                              the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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