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    Yo,
    I m the fastest gun slinger in the west/
    I don稚 expected you to be impressed/
    On how much money I got/
    Or how I知 goin to leave you here to rote/
    I want you to notice/
    On how I created this diss/
    So fast/
    It値l make you go in to the past/
    And see you dead dog/
    Or how you were such a hog/
    Back in kindergarten/
    OOP pardon/
    Wut you say you little fagget/
    I知 gonna eat your body like a maggot/
    Then rip off your face/
    And put your neck in a brace/
    Then cram my money in a suit case/
    And go see the dope man/
    And buy as much weed as I can/
    Then smoke it up in my car/
    Then drive here and thar/
    I知 goin to fuck you up/
    Let Jason cut you up/
    Chop off your head/
    And use the juices as sandwich spread/
    And just to make sure your dead/
    I知 goin to empty a clip in your chest/
    And I知 goin to end your life like the rest/
    You could be a hero or you could be a foe/
    All that I know/
    Is that I cant take this no mow/
    Peace Out

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    didt flow at all

    : NOTE-- make your lines bigger it will improve your flow HEAPS
    -- try not to use the 'Basic' vocab try to make it more complex to make people enjoy it more
    --Last thing is that Your Rhymes are too simple EXTEND YOUR VOCAB
    Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
    The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
    Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
    Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
    MF Grimm

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Tha Essential
      EXTEND YOUR VOCAB
      ^yes, and also keep it up and learn from your mistakes and you'll better
      DAVE DIRTY DROPPING BOMBS ON NETCEES WHO FUCKING SPAM... LISTEN TO HumanHorrorFilm
      HES THE MOD FOR YOU GUYS.

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      • #4
        thanx for your replys

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        • #5
          ^^^^ the word....every thing they sed summed it up...
          just stick at it..ull get betta

          like me when i first started i was so so so wak, i even started beef but over time.....ohhh shit im still the same ....lol ( aint life a bitch!!!! lol)
          Fo` REAL

          DeCeaST
          DJMC
          lil M




          Realizez- Infinate Soldier


          Originally posted by Pawl Derty
          U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
          Originally posted by J-Side
          Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

          Originally posted by Dirt Rich
          You definetely got balls

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