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  • New song - Please leave reps, and keep in mind its only my second song.

    Tell me what yall think, good or bad, but be honest, and if its bad tell me what i could do to improve. Thanks. peace. 1 love. stay up nig gaz.

    Chorus2*
    How could it be, life is so terrible and wrong//
    Its like were all peices of weed, gettin burned in a
    bong//
    Your heer one minute and the next your gone//
    Leaving ure friends crying, listening to this song//

    Verse 1
    yo this go out to all my nigg az that lost they life//
    im almost left all alone in this life full of trife//
    Marcus u my home boy and nothing could tear us//
    When me and u was on the block every one used to fear
    us//
    with out u standing next to me i dont feel as strong//
    I dont think i could keep living on for long//
    lifes much more harder now then it was before//
    I cant believe ure not here with me no more//
    but i aint given up cause u wouldnt want that//
    U would want me to make it through life with a hand on
    my gat//
    Looking for the nig gazz who bust off them caps//
    believe me they going to hell and im gonna be they're
    map//
    and just to let u kno ure little brother stoped
    smoking crack//
    and ure mom finally forgave u for not coming back//
    all the good times we had i could never forget//
    Like the first time i put the ball through that net//
    I know now that my life will never get better//
    I just want u to kno, we're homies forever//
    Chorus 2*
    My life was never easy, but it could have been much worse//
    Like the time ni ggaz licked shots with no remorse//
    And outa all my homies u was the truist//
    if it wasnt for u i would have never become a
    lyricist//
    the pain i felt after ure death was to much to take//
    making believe i didnt wanna cry was the hardest thing
    to fake//
    but u were the one that taught me that real thugz dont
    ever cry//
    Even if it meant that we had to die//
    it was hard but no tears came out of my eye//
    only way out the pain was to get high//
    but once it wore out my eyes swelled again//
    the hatred in my heart just started to flame//
    so i started stabing nig gaz, bullets flying like it
    was rain//
    i blasted any nig ga who tried use ure name//
    when i saw there mothers crying i finally figured this
    wasnt a game//
    And instead of trying to change i was turning into a
    lame//
    and i figured that my life will never get better//
    I just want u to kno, we're homies forever//
    Chorus 2* fading away at the end
    Last edited by azad136; 10-14-2004, 04:28 PM.

  • #2
    ya thats good lotta feeling put into that. but if u extended some of the lines and didnt use words like " lame " and the chourus bit " burned in a bong " that wasnt all that good but if u keep at it and work on ya wordplay.

    go check out my stuff, think its called some shit i wrote or summit like that lol cannot remember .

    peace
    www.facebook.com/rekne6
    www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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    • #3
      thanks dawg, ill look for it.

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      • #4
        uppin.

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        • #5
          that was really good man, i agree with the "lame" part, but the "burned in a bong" part was tight, dont take that out
          8/10

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          • #6
            ^^^ word
            Fo` REAL

            LIL .M. DJMC

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            • #7
              like most of it, 7/8
              Fo` REAL

              LIL .M. DJMC

              22 5


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              Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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              • #8
                Thanks for the feed back, aight ill keep the bong part. uppin for more feed.

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                • #9
                  thanks for all yall replys. Thinking of doing a new song today. Please leave more replys. uppin

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                  • #10
                    uppin.

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                    • #11
                      uppin

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                      • #12
                        thanks. yea it is my second. Im bout to write a third but im 2 lazy right now. ill probably do it 2morow or tuesday.

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                        • #13
                          uppin, im 2 busy to write that 3rd song, but watch out for it, its gonna be nice as hell, or i hope it will be.

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