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  • this is my first song in english

    chorus 1:

    shit i'f bin ditch't by this bitch that i did love with my whole hart
    and now i wish i was still with this bitch cuz she left me over some dum shit and i can't life apart
    from this bitch i know this cuz i think about this bitch every minnuit of each single day
    and if i can get your attention i'd want ya to listin to what i gotta say

    verse 1:

    this is a song about the girl that ik love so very much
    she is my entire world she is the only one i trust
    but now she just make me earl you know why well its because
    she left me for no reason yeah thats right she stitcht
    and now i'm sittin'alone here and im thinkin'about the bitch
    we used to have lots of fun me and her before she ditch me
    and now i'm alone in tears and i'm whishin' she'd still be with me
    i know that i'm a loser for wanting that girl back
    but i'm so afraid i'll lose her ya know i just don't want that
    so above everything i choose her cuz i want her back so bad
    that i'll smack you whit a batt fuck that i'll snap your neck
    if you come closer to her as you suposed to i'ma kick your ass
    so stay away from her as far as you can
    cuz asfar as i'm consourned i am her only man


    chorus 2:

    girl why do you act like a bitch
    i know what i did was wrong
    but that aint no reason to stitch
    cuz you know whithout you i can't go on
    i can't believe this shit did i had my last kiss
    girl you are my only one
    i want ya to know its you that i miss
    and the reason i'm singing this song
    is cuz i want ya back girl thats my only wish


    verse2:

    i know you broke up with me cuz i did'nt listen to you
    you broke up with me cuz i did'nt do what you wanted me to do
    but who are you to tell me what to do
    offcourse life aint just about me but it aint just about you to
    its about giving and taking being loyal and true
    i confess i made a mistake and i regret it
    but its your fault as wel in fact its you who let it
    get out of hand cuz i did'nt want that it
    would be over cuz some dum shit exitently happend
    offcourse i am to blame but your're to blame as well
    because love aint no game no it's serious as hell
    and if its all the same to you listin to what i gotta tell
    i love you and i need you and i want you to
    forgive me yes i really hope you do
    cuz we belong thogeter yeah thats right me and you
    we'll always love eachother forever just us two


    chorus 1:

    shit i'f bin ditch't by this bitch that i did love with my whole hart
    and now i wish i was still with this bitch cuz she left over some dum shit and i can't life apart
    from this bitch i know this cuz i think about this bitch every minnuit of each single day
    and if i can get your attention i'd want ya to listin to what i gotta say


    chorus 2:

    girl why do you act like a bitch
    i know what i did was wrong
    but that aint no reason to stitch
    cuz you know whithout you i can't go on
    i can't believe this shit did i had my last kiss
    girl you are my only one
    i want ya to know its you that i miss
    and the reason i'm singing this song
    is cuz i want ya back thats my only wish

    iīm dutch so i donīt know if i said everything correctly
    FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



    thanks to T&T for the avy

  • #2
    tight shit man.. i can relate to that song.. i gave everything to dis one girl.. she broke up with me for no reason what-so-ever.. and i really did love her and im not sure if i will ever find in sumone else what i found in her.. anyways.. kool shit.. rep point 4 u
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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    • #3
      thnx man
      FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



      thanks to T&T for the avy

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      • #4
        please leave reps
        FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



        thanks to T&T for the avy

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        • #5
          nice shit there peace
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          • #6
            not bad
            The Underground

            SpRaYeD sO mAnY sHeLlS aT yO cLiCk LaSt NiGhT, yOuD tHiNk It WaS "AlL hOlLoWs EvE"-- AKtiviTy

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            • #7
              nice message but crap flow ...( honest) apart from that every thing was tight keep up the spit man....i wanna here some more ..peace
              Fo` REAL

              DeCeaST
              DJMC
              lil M




              Realizez- Infinate Soldier


              Originally posted by Pawl Derty
              U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
              Originally posted by J-Side
              Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

              Originally posted by Dirt Rich
              You definetely got balls

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              • #8
                i know there are some parts that needs to be changed but for the rest the flow works for me
                shame that you canīt read dutch cuz i posted another song on here that is much better
                but thanks for the feedback
                FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



                thanks to T&T for the avy

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                • #9
                  i posted on that aswell!!!...lol

                  well done dude ....
                  Fo` REAL

                  DeCeaST
                  DJMC
                  lil M




                  Realizez- Infinate Soldier


                  Originally posted by Pawl Derty
                  U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
                  Originally posted by J-Side
                  Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

                  Originally posted by Dirt Rich
                  You definetely got balls

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                  • #10
                    yeah i saw it the flow on that one is good though
                    FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



                    thanks to T&T for the avy

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                    • #11
                      i give u repect man, thats good 4 u coz its translated, peace man, nice drop
                      Fo` REAL

                      LIL .M. DJMC

                      22 5


                      touneyz won: 2

                      Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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                      • #12
                        you should see my other one (looking out the window) itīs much better than this
                        FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



                        thanks to T&T for the avy

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                        • #13
                          waiting for some feedback
                          FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



                          thanks to T&T for the avy

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