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    this is a song i wrote, it isnt finished yet, but tell me what you think of it so far

    Verse 1:
    im a tough guy but feel power-less/
    hour-less to count it, while im prowling hell's pits/
    forming a mind of my own and building it/
    people be putting garbage and filling it in my head/
    dont judge a book by the cover, theres alot concealed in the lid/
    come any closer, than deal with the red liquid/
    and if you didnt hear it, than i just plainly did get inturpted/
    someone is gonna get killed when i take this chainsaw and jump-it/
    if the knife is not sharp enough, the blade is insufficient/
    feel no remorse from the blood i made with the axe spinning/
    and thats just the beggining of what i might do
    if my body is found dead, not homicide, i did it

    chorus:
    i do not feel, i do not breathe
    i do not look for happiness, because i cannot see
    no one will miss me when i leave
    your at home when the hospital calls, but you just let it ring

    i do not believe in hope, i do not scream
    if i get cut, i let it bleed
    im never happy, so if you like it or not
    i hope my heart stops so i can dream

    verse 2:
    my life, this just aint working/
    theres no point in it, with trillions of disapointments as well as misfortunes/
    and this is pretty certain, my past is not worth touring/
    and all i ask is, why wasnt i put up for abortion?/
    always backstabbed, so i crawl on my spin, lonely and lurking/
    only thing i might of ever been good at is being a orphan/
    seems like i feel like letting myself hang from a rope, like anything is important/
    so there you go for the people who dont know, and so the subject is shortened/

    chorus

    verse 3:
    (working on it)

    feedback plz!
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

  • #2
    good lyrics i like it
    i posted a song to take a look at it........
    FoR ShiZzLe My WiZzLeS ThIs iS ThE pLoT LiStEn Up...YoU BiZzLeS FoRgOt SLiZzEL DoEs NoT GiVe a FUcK!!!!!!



    thanks to T&T for the avy

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    • #3
      anyone?
      Originally posted by Realize
      evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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