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    If you dont like this i dont give a fuck an you cant copy this shit its paddend


    Itís A Dark Night
    A rap/Poem By
    Joe Degreenia aka Caddilac Joe


    Looking at him sitting in his group red flag hanging from his pants/ living the life of the streets so he holds his stance/ pistol underneath his white T Tucked in his Pants/ cold hearted to the bone probably wishing to get out that area an time zone/ this dark life is his home/ though each of his friends are soldiers an they walk alone/ Now as he is in that group selling a pound to survive/ seems the only thing on his mind is well I walk away from this one alive/ the deal is done/ he turns an walks away fast but doesnít run/ back into the dark he goes/ hoping that he wont get pulled over for what he is by the po poís/ What happens from there everyone knows/ the next night I saw him out on his porch praying to the sky/ its was sad watching him cry/ he wipes the tears from his eye an begins to daze off/ the next night Iím out front my house an I see him leaning an against the street light/ he was crying again saying lord why did he half to die tonight/ I new That deep pain must have been sharp/I looked up an hoped his friend was hearing heavens harp/ an I came over to him for the first time/ I said hey dog do you want to freestyle so we began to rhyme/ saying verse after verse tell none of are pains were shown/ Thugs Cry but they donít cry alone
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    Its tight you got skill
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    It sucks ass
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    really i dont give a fuck
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    wtf is this shit
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