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    CHORUS:

    Iím scary with stealth went to the cemetery to bury myself
    Iím the kid with various health fuck a bitch Iíd rather marry myself
    I play with words and slay the turds and have my way with nerds
    Sure Iíve had sex before bitch, Iíve been laid since birth

    Verse 1:

    Iíve been cursed since birth with an attention to violence
    Iíll glue ya lips shut and cause a prevention from smiling
    I speak the truth make you cut your cheek with your tooth
    Iíll beat you wit a baseball bat, now you wanna beef with ruth?
    Call me a pill popper who will kill a doctor
    Who bills and offers prescriptions for my ill father
    Iím meant to be named as mentally insane Ron John bitch Iím scary
    Iím sick and disturbed and like twistin the words in the English dictionary
    Always skip math to whip ass and get big cash
    I got enough money to buy a car full of thick hash
    But drugs are bad cuz when thugs are mad itís bad news
    But Iím datin a slut whoís takin the drugs bet I got you confused
    You donít wanna awake Ron cuz when I pull out the Ne-palm
    Instantly thatís a year a half and a day gone
    Iím blowin up till I grow up like Mt. St Helen
    Your used to my screws loose and the constant dwellin
    Iíll never give up rap never stop the hatin
    Iím sick and evil enough to drop satan
    Iím just hopin to bust open and erupt
    Blow the top off and burst thatís not good enough
    When the worlds about to end Iíll be bargin to the fair
    Pull out a paper bag and start chargin for air

    Iím scary with stealth went to the cemetery to bury myself
    Iím the kid with various health fuck a bitch Iíd rather marry myself
    I play with words and slay the turds and have my way with nerds
    Sure Iíve had sex before bitch, Iíve been laid since birth

    Verse 2:

    Iím friends with my axe it bends and it whacks
    Itíll definitely be your enemy then youíll relax
    Fuck around with me and youíll learn to hate the mail
    Special delivery of anthrax straight to gail
    Never was a patient person nor treated well
    I dug a whole in the earth and defeated hell
    Which caused the gods of chaos to rise
    Now spirits will murder the innocent and take their eyes
    but Iím the center of attention the devil so come burn with me
    In a million years I might chose you then itíll be your turn to be
    Most people like the deadly melody that I bring to your ears
    Iím not a faggot like Elton john who sings to queers
    I insert words frontwards and backwards in an apeallin way
    fuck a butt fuckin faggot tell me are you feelin gay?

    need feedback and could you rate this from 1-10 plz and thnx peace
    Last edited by dopeMC; 10-17-2004, 07:15 PM.
    dope said that!^^

  • #2
    that HAD TIGHT RYHMES man, some crazy shit right there.....except "Pull out a paper bag and start chargin for air" i know i heard that in an eminem song so i dont know if you thought of it too or what but overall thats some nice shit...8.5/10

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    • #3
      Oh really, I aint no biter, and i never heard em say that but thanx for the feedback!

      uppin people
      dope said that!^^

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      • #4
        still uppin on feedback
        dope said that!^^

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        • #5
          ....gud.... summa that was tight, but summa that needs wrk 2, nice drop
          Fo` REAL

          LIL .M. DJMC

          22 5


          touneyz won: 2

          Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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          • #6
            Thanx M

            uppin
            dope said that!^^

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            • #7
              Nice shit dawg
              I liked it alot
              Chorus was hot
              {DeAthB4DiShoNor}

              {Record} {Wins - 5} {Loss - 3}

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              • #8
                its actaully "im gonna put air into a bag and charge people to breath" its a underground freestyle by eminem, i dont know if you bit that or not, but its damn close

                asside from that it wasnt bad, decent chorus 6/10

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