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    i dont even care, pull out some teeth and some hair
    shoot a flair gun in the air, go ahead and just blair
    ya music till ya parents yell and throw chairs, hell yea,go histerical
    reminisce the times on who was beat and whose hair was pulled
    when the chord was beaten ya ass,leaven it rashed, bruced up and smashed
    it was your dad who caused all the problems you have
    blame it on him an the way you were raised
    and how his hand would raise and come down on your face
    with the taste of blood now on your plate
    with him starren you down, spittin and cussen
    till your embarrased in crowds, infront of your cousins
    beat by the one that you loved, kissed and you hugged
    now your wishen for God to start switchen it up
    let you beat him down till he has to piss in a cup
    can't sit or get up,pull out the ear plugs
    its time for him to start listenen up and given a fuck
    its your time to speak, your tongue, your cheek
    no more cowarding weak in the corner all week
    not making a peep cause your scared to get beat
    not moving your feet,no breathing with nuttin to eat
    acten all pussy and making it discrete
    now you gotta yank at ya teeth, jump in the streets
    fuck your father and his father and their fathers
    don't bother to father your kids like they did
    or you'll have a son growing up from a daughter
    they had it all abckwards, tied up in a knot, a couple of odd balls
    trying to walk tall when there mad, but its sad
    cause i know, what they show,wasnt close, to what they had, and im glad that i grewup
    cuz when i was a lad the only way to get away from my dad was getten on ta the school bus
    Last edited by BumBum; 10-20-2004, 04:31 PM.

  • #2
    Originally posted by BumBum
    i dont even care, pull out some teeth and some hair
    shoot a flair gun in the air, go ahead and just blair
    ya music till ya parents yell and throw chairs, hell yea,go histerical
    reminisce the times on who was beat and whose hair was pulled
    when the chord was beaten ya ass,leaven it rashed, bruced up and smashed
    it was your dad who caused all the problems you have
    blame it on him an the way you were raised
    and how his hand would raise and come down on your face
    with the taste of blood now on your plate
    with him starren you down, spittin and cussen
    till your embarrased in crowds, infront of your cousins
    beat by the one that you loved, kissed and you hugged
    now your wishen for God to start switchen it up
    let you beat him down till he has to piss in a cup
    can't sit or get up,pull out the ear plugs
    its time for him to start listenen up and given a fuck
    its your time to speak, your tongue, your cheek
    no more cowarding weak in the corner all week
    not making a peep cause your scared to get beat
    not moving your feet,no breathing with nuttin to eat
    acten all pussy and making it discrete
    now you gotta yank at ya teeth, jump in the streets
    fuck your father and his father and their fathers
    don't bother to father your kids like they did
    or you'll have a son growing up from a daughter
    they had it all abckwards, tied up in a knot, a couple of odd balls
    trying to walk tall when there mad, but its sad
    cause i know, what they show,wasnt close, to what they had, and im glad that i grewup
    cuz when i was a lad the only way to get away from my dad was the school bus
    nice story heartfelt stuff this is nice indeed..good drop
    FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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    • #3
      i feel what ure saying, be better if it rhymed a bit more it need a little bit mroe flow aswell other than that 8/10
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      • #4
        Originally posted by reKon.
        i feel what ure saying, be better if it rhymed a bit more it need a little bit mroe flow aswell other than that 8/10
        yes you are absolutley right on that to the third grain....all it need was a little bit more rhymes
        FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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        • #5
          wtf..more rhymes....this is makin me feel like you people dont read it right....is it suppose to rhyme like cat and hat...boy and toy....no man....cat and had.....boy and coined....there off rhymes...dammit, every musician uses them..this is a rap man...care hair flair blare...4 rhymes iin two lines....wtf, how many u want...u want more rhymes...read my The WAY i Mosh lyrics...read the chorus and the first verse...theres a million and a half rhymes for yea..till then....learn wat a rhyme is, for real people, for real....PeAcE for now

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          • #6
            yo if u really can flow go to my thread called the freestyle church in the freestyle forum call lets hear your six lines of sadness...there we will determine if you are really a good lyricist
            FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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            • #7
              lol dont ask for criticism if you cant take it, but if you cant flow dont be harsh either

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