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    i get BORED as i SCROLL through this WHOLE ENTIRE-BOARD
    people COMPLAININ,always SAYEN i should always be RHYMEN-MORE
    so im gonna make you all happy,by putting all my RHYMES-IN-BOLD
    now can you SEE-EM,can you READ-EM?come on and ANSWER-ME
    is it all ALRIGHT for this SITE,is it TIGHT?can you stop PANCEN-ME
    tryin to get me EMBARASSED by leaven me BAIR-ASSED
    POSTEN your two cents about my rhymes, my EMMOTIONS
    not EVEN in a constructive manner,your just LEAVEN me FLOATEN
    COMPTIPLATEN on whats your STATEN cuz i dont see no CLOSEN
    no ending ARGUMENT that tells me what ALL-YOU-MEANT
    ATEAST COMPLETE whats you MEAN so i dont FALL-AGAIN
    im getten PISSED everytime someone has to BITCH
    about the rhymes not being PERFECT,should i QUIT
    just GIVE-UP, dont LIVE-UP to the SHIT and THROW-A-FIT
    fuck IT, im done,everything i SAID is DEAD and OVER-WIT
    TILL i see one of your RHYMES KILL MINE, just CLOSE-YOUR-LIPS
    SHUT the FUCK up,put ya dildo away and EXPOSE-YA-TITS
    and i dont mean to be MEAN,but from what i am SEEIN
    every last one of you's has BEEN haven fun while your PEEING
    and pissin on everyTHING that i write down and it SEEMS
    like you have something against me,some sort of a HATRED
    CLAIMIN what im SAYEN is BASIC,my talent is WAISTED
    strippin me NAKED,of my balls that i HOLD and my MORALS
    post what you want me to do,and i'll read it later today or TOMOROW


    no diss to any one...im just getting frustrated....thnx for feedback, but sometimes it makes no sence...elaberate...PeAcE for now....and good looks ppl

  • #2
    yo dawg i like how ya did that shit up in there, with that type of ryhme and the other one too, but what the fucks up with that other shit dawg i mean look at it you should change that part FO SHO......

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    • #3
      nice drop
      www.facebook.com/rekne6
      www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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      • #4
        Yeah I like that shit. It's a nice. Your rhymes were decent. I mostly like the whole resoning behind it the most. I've also been frusturated with the way things work around here but don't sweat the small shit homie. If you belive in your heart that your dope that's all that matter. Overall I'd give your shit a 7. Nice drop. Keep doing what your doing.


        Stay REAL,
        Rick.
        7Digit
        UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

        You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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        • #5
          thnx for sum real feedback finally.....uppin....PeAcE for now

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          • #6
            I agree with what Rick says... If you think its a good drop then it is... Music is self reflection and although we do put our rhymes up in here its just mainly to see what others think of the feeling or the frustration that your trying to get through in rhymes... Nice drop dawg I enjoyed reading it...
            Runnin Solo

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