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  • >Quick spit tell me what yall think< REPS

    Ima father and bastard sumtimes labelled a cunt,
    And Ima son and partner all rolled up into one,
    So come have fun and do exactly as I do,
    Get blind rotten drunk and OD off of shrooms,
    I know my times comin soon but fuck it Iím young,
    So Ima keep doin as I do until I die at 31,
    I can fly as high as I want with no regrets to face up to,
    Except the fact that my baby may do as I do,
    So fuck it Iím through no more livin rude,
    The only reason Iím rhymin is so I can afford food,
    So for now its family first and foremost,
    No more livin large travlin coast to coast.
    Runnin Solo

  • #2
    It's alright. Nothing mind blowing but I'm a tuff critque. The beginning 2 lines were my fav you should try to expand on something more deep with those 2 lines. Good luck



    Always Keepin' It REAL,
    Rick.
    7Digit
    UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

    You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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    • #3
      Not Bad for a quick lil thing. Nice topic its alwaiz a popular one to use. Flow was a bit off but only cauz lines were short. But good way to express yourself

      peace
      Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
      The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
      Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
      Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
      MF Grimm

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      • #4
        nice 12 linz 4 a quck spit!!!sum nice multiez
        Fo` REAL

        LIL .M. DJMC

        22 5


        touneyz won: 2

        Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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        • #5
          nice spit u ive seen u write better tho
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          www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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