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  • My first freestyle!

    You aint heard of me before, the names Thug Life//
    Don`t turn your back coz ill fuck your Wife//
    I`m lyrically blessed, here to Posses//
    Fuck with me bitch you`ll be in Distress//
    The best way to go in life is to Progress//
    Step out of line before i spit the Rest//
    When i come to town, the place goes Quiet//
    I hear a sound i`ll make a Riot//
    When it comes to black, when it comes to white//
    Race means shit when it comes to Freight//
    Money brings power, power brings Money//
    If you aint got either then unlucky Dummy//
    I`m from the home town of Briton Ferry//
    Representing the United Kingdom so be Warey//
    When it comes to Boxing im like Muhamad Ali//
    I float like a butterfly and sting like a Bee//
    Your hands cant hit, what your eyes cant See//
    So watch how you talk when its said to Me//
    Thats me done so B.Y.E//
    If you got something to say then Pm Me//

    Uppin for feedback! Peace!
    Last edited by Thug Life; 10-25-2004, 06:55 AM.
    -=((Battle Record))=-
    ...26-Wins...
    ...5-Loses...
    ...19-KO's...
    Unleashed Skillz Tourny Winner

  • #2
    is tight man but try goin more lyrical,nice spit

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    • #3
      Thanks..lyrical as in better words?
      Peace!
      -=((Battle Record))=-
      ...26-Wins...
      ...5-Loses...
      ...19-KO's...
      Unleashed Skillz Tourny Winner

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      • #4
        cco 4 ya 1st spit all i can say is keep at it, u will elavate!!! n make ur lines bit longer, peace, like ur avatar 2 man - random
        Fo` REAL

        LIL .M. DJMC

        22 5


        touneyz won: 2

        Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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        • #5
          Nice on welke, almost as good as me!:D
          "Turn It Up Mother Fuckers"

          Fools tryna bring some serious beef//
          Must be dilerious coz ya'll just some serious geeks//

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          • #6
            What a bunch of wack cliches. But it's your first time. You need to work more on it.

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            • #7
              >>I float like a butterfly and sting like a Bee<<

              haha where did ya get that from i wonder? But apart from that for ya first time its pretty gd work. Keep it up

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              • #8
                Originally posted by EightBallFlow
                What a bunch of wack cliches. But it's your first time. You need to work more on it.
                Lets see you do a fuckin freestyle! Post it on here
                -=((Battle Record))=-
                ...26-Wins...
                ...5-Loses...
                ...19-KO's...
                Unleashed Skillz Tourny Winner

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                • #9
                  yo dogg...that shit was straight dont let these untalented muh fuckas tell u different
                  .....----2 HooD----.....

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                  • #10
                    Thanks dogg
                    Respect!
                    -=((Battle Record))=-
                    ...26-Wins...
                    ...5-Loses...
                    ...19-KO's...
                    Unleashed Skillz Tourny Winner

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                    • #11
                      Simplistic. Didn't strike any cords with me. Personally I didn't like it. I'd give it a 3.




                      Keepin It REAL,
                      Rick.
                      7Digit
                      UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

                      You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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                      • #12
                        Check out my Second Freestyle!
                        Peace!
                        -=((Battle Record))=-
                        ...26-Wins...
                        ...5-Loses...
                        ...19-KO's...
                        Unleashed Skillz Tourny Winner

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                        • #13
                          you know, u should really listen to rick//
                          after hearing him, you'll be on his dick//

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                          • #14
                            Silence your violence keep injecting your smack Juice//
                            Before i bring out the scalpel and cut off your Prepuce//
                            (look the word up in the dicionary Maggot)
                            Peace!
                            -=((Battle Record))=-
                            ...26-Wins...
                            ...5-Loses...
                            ...19-KO's...
                            Unleashed Skillz Tourny Winner

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                            • #15
                              once agian, more than 1 bar please

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