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  • Crooks Diss

    W!gger, W!gger, W!gger can’t you see,
    you’re just as white as me,
    so quit acting like you’re a G,
    you fake ass sad excuse of an emcee,

    Ha Ha Ha… Bitch you shouldn’t have stepped to me, seriously faggot… you shouldn’t have – prepare to have your illiterate mind shattered to pieces.

    Yo… Yo…

    My “accusation” is that you’re the product of “masturbation”,
    your mother should get some sort of “compensation”
    for popping you out when the doctors had been treating her for “constipation”
    I look at you and your “relation” (brother) in “fascination”
    wondering how the hell a whole “generation” couldn’t make it to “graduation”
    Y’all seriously need some decent “education”
    If you ever want to make it out of that job in the “gas-station”
    and into a real “occupation” So, without any “hesitation”
    I’m bringing this battle to “termination”,
    it’s straight up “annihilation” your spits already way beyond “salvation”
    And dude what’s with your “infatuation” about my sexual “orientation”?
    I know you get a “warm-sensation” thinking about me giving you a “sperm-donation”
    But there’s no chance on me ever engaging in male on male “penetration”
    There’s your “confirmation” so push that thought straight outta’ your “imagination”
    Dawg why the fuck did you even step up to this kind of “humiliation”?
    You must have knew my words would make you defy the rules of “gravitation”
    Slap you under the chin and have your ass stuck in “levitation”
    There’s some wordplay for you faggot, how you like that for “personification”
    Bitch I’ll put an end to your “respiration”, leave your ass on “ventilation”
    Fuck it, bring your boy Jae and I’ll murder the entire “collaboration”
    Just so you know, this is only the start of the Lethal Inmate “extermination”
    Once I’ve finished my “operation” the Inmates will be in “extinction”
    That’s no “exaggeration” I’ll straight up tear you apart from the “foundation”
    And I ain’t in this for no “glorification” because me murking you is everyone’s “expectation”
    Seeing you laying face down on the curb will be enough “gratification”
    Not to mention knowing I was the one behind your “eradication”
    Dude battling cats like you does nothing for my “reputation”
    It’s not like I even have to try to gain “domination”
    And to be honest I’m kinda’ lacking the “motivation”
    To completely slay another bitch suffering from “retardation”
    So I’ll make this my last “decapitation” before going on an herb battling “vacation”

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    This was a diss I wrote as a battle verse on another site... Feedback both negative and positive welcome... if leaving negative feedback, please make it constructive - I don't want to know "it sucks" and just leave it at that.

    One.
    "We can't afford to live, so abortions rise
    Can't afford the truth, so we told to lie
    Can't afford a funeral, 'cause the costs is high
    God damn, we can't even afford to die!"
    - Monopoly by Papoose

  • #2
    "wish i could rap" fuk u, u can u just proved it there man ^^^^^ nice shit, likin the rymes, complex man, coo, but its not all bout the rymes, the flow fuked up a lil, but overall i like 7-8/10
    Fo` REAL

    LIL .M. DJMC

    22 5


    touneyz won: 2

    Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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    • #3
      if you fit some more multis in to rework the flow a lil, that shit would be fuckin FIRE. def likin it, i was feelin the beginning a lot. Keep em comming if u have ne more. 1

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      • #4
        Yeah, I really suck as far as flow is concerned... I got the punches and vocab down - I've been told that many a time... I've never actually been beat in any of those catagories in the 10 online battles I've been in, lol. (9-1 overall record)

        If any y'all got some pointers on how I can improve my flow... feel free to holler at me.

        Thanks for the feedback, one.
        "We can't afford to live, so abortions rise
        Can't afford the truth, so we told to lie
        Can't afford a funeral, 'cause the costs is high
        God damn, we can't even afford to die!"
        - Monopoly by Papoose

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