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    When i come through ure hood, everybody will show me
    respect// cause like the black death i infect, kill
    everybody like they were insects// i dont shoot at the
    body so your neck is what u should protect// i love to
    catch live prey, ill put out my blunts in your face
    like u were an ashtray// Ill leave the women alive and
    eat like i was at a buffet// drinking blood like i was
    at a cafe, fuckin with me will insure doomsday// im
    the gateway between life and death, look at me the
    wrong way and thatll be ure last breath// ill kidnap
    ure son to cause u heartache and cook him like he was
    a slice of bacan(bacon, hop yall could read it so
    itll rhyme with son)// aint the one for games ill
    stick a knife in your brain for just saying my name//
    cook you over a open flame, fuckin bithces for just
    there frame//kill mad people, and frame innocent
    *****z to take the blame// Death is my nickname cause
    i love to torture, throw u in the ocean while ure tied
    to an anchor// i kno u dont wanna die so keep my name out
    your mouth, or ill make sure ure killed and buried
    down south//

  • #2
    shit was straight, could be a lil more complex tho. try some metaphors or imagery or sumthing. Not hatin, just some advice. 1

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    • #3
      thanks dawg. ill take ure advice.

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      • #4
        uppin

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