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    hey rekon i evened the bars out just for you...

    just b, you say that you pray i respond to you...

    what are you desperate for attention...

    remember how this started...

    i was dissing rick and you butted in...

    mine and ricks beef is squashed...

    guess you took his place though...

    too bad, you about to catch a bad one...

    im the new face in this place betta gaurd your race/
    for this paper i chase ill put a glock to your face/
    its in your best interest shut the fuck up mr. cruz/
    cause you blowing smurfs like you playing the blues/
    it must be your pussy as crew that has you so cocky/
    this is a boxing ring, your ivan drago and im rocky/
    you see your metaphores suck, and sound real choppy/
    probably cause your girls' a hoe and dresses sloppy/
    forgot my names richy rich i pull hoes like a hitch/
    you a popo lying ass bitch youll always be a snitch/
    my flows like a computer and yours is just a glitch/
    i just sewed this battle up, without using a stitch/
    you betta be careful about where you choose to walk/
    police gonna' be drawing around you body with chalk/
    Last edited by sliminemathers; 10-26-2004, 04:31 PM.

  • #2
    it was cool. so of it wasn't the best i've seen from you. but i thought these three lines were pretty ill.

    forgot my names richy rich i pull hoes like a hitch/
    you a popo lying ass bitch youll always be a snitch/
    my flows like a computer and yours is just a glitch/
    i just sewed this battle up, without using a stitch/


    that pullin' hoes like a hitch shits clever I read it in some other post you posted in over good stuff. just some advice though try and lean back off all the "i fucked you bitch" shit. I know I've propbably did it myself I'm admiting it. But it's to easy of a stab at your oppenent and it's often over used. No hate, just my 2 cents keep doin' what your doin' playa.


    Keepin' It REAL,
    Rick
    7Digit
    UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

    You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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    • #3
      wrong placement
      Last edited by SmOgS; 10-27-2004, 12:44 AM.

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      • #4
        thanks for the constructive criticism rick

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        • #5
          aight just b its been like a three days, you ever going to respond? it better be good, seeing how its taken you so long

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