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  • Run Rabbit, run! (J\_/zt zome zhit i mixd up) FEEDBACK N CC PLZ

    F0r y0 fuckaz out th3r3, CC means constructive criticism or wh4t3vr...

    Some days I just wanna up and call it quits,
    I feel like Iím surrounded by a wall of bricks,
    Everytime I go to get up I just fall in piss,
    My lifeís like one great big ball of shit,
    If I could just put it all in all I spit,
    Instead I always try to swallow it,
    Instead of staring at this wall and shit,
    While I sit writers block sick of all this shit,
    Cant call it shit, all I know is Iím about to hit the wall,
    If I have to see another one of momís alchaholic fits,
    This is it, last straw, thats all, thats it,
    I ainít dealing with another fucking politic,
    Iím like a stewin bubble in him, till it filters up,
    Iím about to kill it, I can feel it building up,
    Blow this building up, Iíve been sealed enough,
    My cup run it over Iíve been filled up,
    But then explosion bust and spills my guts,
    You think all I do is stand here and feel my nuts,
    But Iím a show you what, you gonna feel my rush,
    You donít feel it then it must be too real to touch,
    Feel to touch, Iím about to tear shit up,
    Goosebumps, yeah Iím make your hair sit up,
    Yeah sit up, Iím a tell you who I be,
    Iím make you hate me cause you ainít me,
    You aint, it ainít to late to finally see,
    What you close minded fucks were too blind to see,
    Whoever find me, is gonna get a finders fee,
    Out this world and ainít no one out there mind as me,
    You need peace of mind, well hereís a piece of mine,
    All I needís a line but sometimes,
    I donít always find the words to rhyme,
    To express how Iím really feeling at that time,
    Yeah sometimes, sometimes, sometimes, just sometimes,
    Its always me, how dark can these hallways be,
    The clock stikes midnight, 1, 2, then half past 3,
    This half ass rhyme with this half ass piece of paper, (tear)
    Iím desperate at my desk if I could just get the rest,
    Of this shit off my chest, again, stuck in this slum,
    Cant think of nothing, fuck Iím stumped,
    But wait here comes something,
    Nope, itís not good enough, scribbel it out, new pad,
    Krinkel it up and throw that shit out,
    Iím fisseling now thought I had figured it out,
    Ballís in my court but Iím scared to dribbel it out,
    But Iím afraid, why am I afaid, why am I a slave to this trade,
    Sign that Iíll spit to the grave, real enough to rawl you up,
    What me to flip it I can rip it any style you want,
    Iím a switch, yeah a bitch, jimmy smith ainít a quitter,
    Iím a sit here till I get enough,
    For me to finally hit a fucking boiling point,
    Put some oil in your joints,
    Flip the coin bitch come get destroyed,
    An mcís worst dream I make them tense since they hate me,
    See me and shake like a shangeling fence,
    By the looks of them you would swear yours was comming,
    By the scream of them you would swear Iím sawing something,
    By the way they running you would swear the law was coming,
    Its now or never tonight is all or nothing,
    Momma, jimmy keep leaving on us, he said heíd be back,
    He pinky promised, I donít think heís honest,
    I be back baby I just got to beat this clock,
    Fuck this clock, Iím make them eat this watch,
    Dont believe me watch, Iím a win this race,
    And Iím a come back and rub my shit in your face,
    Bitch I found my neck, you gonna hear my voice,
    Till you sick of it you ainít gonna have a choice,
    If I gotta scream till I have half a lung,
    If I have half a chance I grab it, rabbit run...

  • #2
    Uhm, Aren't you jus coppin' Eminems Lyrics? Or Am I missing the Point of something?


    • #3


      • #4
        Yeah lol

        Yup i was just coppin Em... lol... Im sorry folx. Actually i dont write lyrics at all. Just wantd to s33 if folx wood c i was coppin Em.



        • #5
          ................ biter
          Fo` REAL

          LIL .M. DJMC

          22 5

          touneyz won: 2

          Lil M is the H.N.I.C


          • #6
            if ur gonna bite sum1 rhymes, at least get all the fuckin words right...


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