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My FIRST ever freestyle..."My anti-war song"

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  • My FIRST ever freestyle..."My anti-war song"

    what if we got to decide/if we was takin tha ride...to iraq./
    Wonderin if we'd ever come back/
    or if wed be mailed home inside a body bag/
    along with our severed head, and a fuckin toe tag./
    what if there was a president who REALLY gave a shit/
    that cared so much for us/hed sacrifice his own kids/
    help em pack their bags/put em on a plane/
    dodgin bullets in the desert/lookin for hussein/
    but hed never do that/that'd be insane/
    cuz if one of them died/then hed feel the pain/
    that the parents of the lost feel/every single day/
    so hes on his knees in his suit/now he starts to pray/
    dear god this is mr president/you've made it so evident that i'm the evil resident of the whitehouse/and i really didn't care/
    that peoples kids are dying/but now my kids are there/
    and please forget how i've fucked my country/
    and make it irrelevant that i was blind and didn't see/
    but i pray to you/get my kids back to me safely
    /amen..mr president/ps take them before me

    This is MY first freestyle so...everyone lemmie know how I did ok? and its not done...and if someone wants to add, please do.....i'm interested to see what someone else would add
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    Tight flow, and message
    16.67%
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    Tight message, whack ass flow
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    Tight flow, whack message
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    0
    Whack through and through
    33.33%
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    Pretty good, needs some things fixed
    50.00%
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  • #2
    thats pretty hot dawg.

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    • #3
      i liked it could be fixed up a lil better tho an fuck bush an as far as im concerned fuck kerry
      FullBred

      I am tha don FullBled

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      • #4
        Not bad.....

        but thats not a freestyle

        freestyle is when u freestyle in MIC without having a rhyme paper.

        i know mace freestyle sometimes.
        Originally posted by no good27
        I'm starting to think that X-Plosiv may be god incarnated.
        Originally posted by MEADOWS_KILLAS
        Post one more negative thing towards me and ill impregnate every fucking lizzard you have.

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        • #5
          "pretty good, needs some things fixed"
          Fo` REAL

          LIL .M. DJMC

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          Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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          • #6
            yea, it was wack in some parts.. but good in other. not bad for a beginner.
            Love, live life, proceed, progress

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