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    yo im trying this new style. tell me what yall think. thanks. peace.

    u wanna fuck with enterprise u better not nig ga thats my advice, or in ure own blood u will be baptized//

    my shit break the laws of physics, my shells fly clockwise, to shoot u in both ure fuckin cockeyes//

    after i kill ure whole family itill be time for a comprimise, come in to my castle and all ull see is eyes and cries//

    for help from ni ggaz about to meet their demise, every nig ga beat always denies, and start to devise, not knowin every nig ga i beef with always dies//

    ill kill u in the daylight nig ga fuck a disguise, ill kill u in the night when bullets will light up the skies like fireflies//

    no one gon stop enterprise we gon be a fuckin franchize, dippin nig gaz in ketcup like they was fries//

    this rhyme is not a diss it implies to every feen, who lies sayin they not jealous and end up shot while wearin neckties//

    kill ni ggaz in front of they family so i could hear the outcries, no gang could ever outsize, enterprise//

    im hear to kill all rabbis, shoot them in they red of there eyes, and collect the prise//

    every ni gga relies on they friends so ill kill them first and hear there replies, change there plans so they got to revise//

    azad and ditto nig ga we streetwise, we cop the gayest shit and we stylize, from moonrise to sunrise//

    we buy suplies stayin ready for war, and killing nig gaz in suprise//

    nig gaz got to stop trying to theorize, cause im in between they wives thighs// and we got cop ties, so itll be unwise//

    to fuck with us, cause enterprise hear till we die//
    Last edited by azad136; 10-31-2004, 10:35 AM.

  • #2
    replys please. uppin.

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    • #3
      im not gonna read it make it clearer an easier to read then ill give you some feed

      ie:write like this
      ......................./line #1
      ....................../line #2

      little easier to read like that
      FullBred

      I am tha don FullBled

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      • #4
        aight. its just when im spittin and typin at the same time, its hard to press the start key and shit. ill clear it up tho.

        Edit: hopefully its easier to read now.
        Last edited by azad136; 10-31-2004, 10:36 AM.

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        • #5
          aight homie its coool yay i can read it now!!

          "u wanna fuck with enterprise u better not nig ga thats my advice, or in ure own blood u will be baptized// " i love that opener

          my shit break the laws of physics, my shells fly clockwise, to shoot u in both ure fuckin cockeyes//
          dont get this part

          "ill kill u in the daylight nig ga fuck a disguise, ill kill u in the night when bullets will light up the skies like fireflies//" almost as creative as dirt rich an daz


          i liked it but you used tha ize scheme 3 times after ending it it would be best to use em all less you was freein which i think you qwas considering this it was ill as fuck

          9/10
          FullBred

          I am tha don FullBled

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          • #6
            thanks dawg. the cockeyes shit i ment like u kno when cockeyes look straight at u, but really see something else, i ment that my bullets fly the other way but get u in the end.

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            • #7
              uppin

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              • #8
                wat dey sed^^^^^^ da word!!!!
                Fo` REAL

                DeCeaST
                DJMC
                lil M




                Realizez- Infinate Soldier


                Originally posted by Pawl Derty
                U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
                Originally posted by J-Side
                Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

                Originally posted by Dirt Rich
                You definetely got balls

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                • #9
                  The Shit Is Hot Dawg!! No Lie. Hell I Loved It. Look Forward 2 More Of Ya Flows
                  Didn't you know
                  i was waiting on you
                  Waiting on a dream
                  that'll never come true
                  Didn't you know
                  i was waiting on you
                  My face turnt to stone
                  when i heard the news

                  Kanye West-Bad News

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                  • #10
                    thanks yall. many more flows comming soon. in other words uppin.

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                    • #11
                      ohhh y u only beef with "blacks"...u racist or summat , is ma white ass not gud enough 4 ya???/
                      jk dawg
                      Fo` REAL

                      DeCeaST
                      DJMC
                      lil M




                      Realizez- Infinate Soldier


                      Originally posted by Pawl Derty
                      U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
                      Originally posted by J-Side
                      Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

                      Originally posted by Dirt Rich
                      You definetely got balls

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                      • #12
                        ohh just FO ma 600 post ide just like to say....please may i be awarded with a rep point....!!!!!...lol
                        Fo` REAL

                        DeCeaST
                        DJMC
                        lil M




                        Realizez- Infinate Soldier


                        Originally posted by Pawl Derty
                        U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
                        Originally posted by J-Side
                        Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

                        Originally posted by Dirt Rich
                        You definetely got balls

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                        • #13
                          i was bout to say what u mean with blacks. I aint even black myself. but i aint white tho. Fo sho u could get a rep son.

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                          • #14
                            thanx dawg...ahve one bk...lol
                            Fo` REAL

                            DeCeaST
                            DJMC
                            lil M




                            Realizez- Infinate Soldier


                            Originally posted by Pawl Derty
                            U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
                            Originally posted by J-Side
                            Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

                            Originally posted by Dirt Rich
                            You definetely got balls

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                            • #15
                              ^ what all dem bitches said ^
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