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  • It's The Lyrical Monster *post feedback*

    [Verse 1]
    My lyrical mentality cause brain cells brutality
    Undoubtedly the illest with a psychopathic personality
    Mortal Kombat this shit ends with a fatality
    Moralities mixed up, my scriptures are the definition of immortality
    Words on point and on time untouchable punctuality
    In actuality I question your criminality
    Thug? Murderer? Or a bitch into homosexuality?
    In reality Iím an animal with this pen canít fuck with me this ainít bestiality
    Regardless of your nationality ill confront you with formality
    Get bored of that shit and show proof of your mortality
    Having you run to your father what is this genetic abnormality
    Both of you like ice cube got a bitch in you
    Iíll expose it fully progressing to mutilate you
    Saturday night becomes murder night for you
    The next day your family is saying nothing but ďI got a funeral to go toĒ
    Have you resting on Sunday like a fukin ***

    [Chorus]
    Itís the lyrical monster coming to eat
    Keeping it street, while your covered in a white sheet
    Itís the lyrical monster coming to eat
    Me and words pure heat, canít fuck with this elite

    [Verse 2]
    Two years ahead of time, two- thousand and six, sick with it
    Quick spit two thousand and six words before you hear the beat hit
    Snuffed the track, explains the punches listen to the crunches
    Hear me destroy the beat shits walking on crutches
    My pen isnít five-o ballpoint but itíll give you cardiac arrest
    Exorcist in the mist fog covers my pen, its possessed
    Writes sick on request, itís on an ill streak like it was runnin around undressed
    You rap accapella coz I stole your beat you was using it wrong
    Not biting that rocafella but ďyou made it a hot beat I made it a hot songĒ
    Iím a phenomenon from now Iím on some verbal kill shit
    Choking you with my lyrics if you say they shit
    Slit your throat with my alliteration got an alliance with hip-hop
    Pledge allegiance to it in return itíll demote you like a homicide to a traffic cop
    The lyrical monster is coming to eat ainít shit sweet
    Sending you back to god hope your mother kept a receipt
    Guillotine abolishment time you know the routine
    Iíll chop of your head like a kill bill scene
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  • #2
    Wow. I'm impressed with the level of extreme wackness this rhyme reaches. Rappers are being more and more of a disgrace as we know it. The only good ones are dead.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Symptom
      Wow. I'm impressed with the level of extreme wackness this rhyme reaches. Rappers are being more and more of a disgrace as we know it. The only good ones are dead.
      *****, let me quote myself
      "Choking you with my lyrics if you say they shit"
      http://img46.photobucket.com/albums/v142/BB-Entertainment/test.gif

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      • #4
        Ya rhymes are propa sikkkkk bre!
        I'm the Mujahideen and I'm making a scene! now your gonna feel what the boom boom mean like tupac said when i die i aint dead we are the matyr's you are squashed tomatoes

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        • #5
          Originally posted by guji_gangster
          *****, let me quote myself
          "Choking you with my lyrics if you say they shit"
          You're choking me, yet I still seem to be breathing. Who said I was a *****? Lol, you make me laugh.
          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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          • #6
            Originally posted by yUnGbUcKswIfEy
            Ya rhymes are propa sikkkkk bre!
            thanx sexy
            uppin for more feedback
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            • #7
              nice drop, thats sum of best newbie shit ive seen in a while!
              Fo` REAL

              LIL .M. DJMC

              22 5


              touneyz won: 2

              Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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              • #8
                ^^ what he sed ^^
                www.facebook.com/rekne6
                www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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                • #9
                  thnxs
                  uppin for mre feedback
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                  • #10
                    was ok, but the whole first verse is just "ality"

                    that aint that hard

                    Try to make more multisyllable rhyme patterns

                    It was ok tho
                    The Big 4
                    http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
                    http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
                    http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
                    http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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                    • #11
                      thanxs
                      uppin for more feedback
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                      • #12
                        ive lived through this time and made some history
                        when i die, i know theyll miss me
                        the stuff comes out of my brain
                        but ive learned to numb all the pain
                        i can rhyme in the light, or better in the dark
                        seen legends built, seen em torn apart
                        Shady and Murder, created big problems
                        Eminem sucked when he tried to rap about Harlem
                        but back on the case of my corrupted activities
                        or thats what they call them when i enjoy my victories
                        how others have gotten a sick reputation for rhyming
                        ive been known to make people cry in just a short timing
                        sooner than you think, people die
                        Holla atcha boy, before its too late for goodbye

                        OWNS YOU ALL

                        jk, but these were typed by me in about 3 minutes.
                        Originally posted by Billy_72
                        Q: What did 50 Cent say to to his grandma after she knit him a sweater?
                        A: Gee, You knit?

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Rellanza
                          ive lived through this time and made some history
                          when i die, i know theyll miss me
                          the stuff comes out of my brain
                          but ive learned to numb all the pain
                          i can rhyme in the light, or better in the dark
                          seen legends built, seen em torn apart
                          Shady and Murder, created big problems
                          Eminem sucked when he tried to rap about Harlem
                          but back on the case of my corrupted activities
                          or thats what they call them when i enjoy my victories
                          how others have gotten a sick reputation for rhyming
                          ive been known to make people cry in just a short timing
                          sooner than you think, people die
                          Holla atcha boy, before its too late for goodbye

                          OWNS YOU ALL

                          jk, but these were typed by me in about 3 minutes.

                          stop fukin freepostin in my thread chump
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                          • #14
                            Sounds like every other forum freestyle, nothing special at all.
                            "I own so many jerseys, I'ma throwback mess/I hit the cleaners and tell em' I want a full court press." - Ludacris "Hip Hop Quotables"

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by -Dirty Slugga-
                              Sounds like every other forum freestyle, nothing special at all.
                              oooooooooooooo!!!!
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