HIP HOP LIFESTYLE

Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

quick freestyle

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • quick freestyle

    aight i wrote this pretty quick tell me what ya think

    ay yo what the fuck is goin on in this rap game
    all ya'll *****s be claiming they gon put me through pain

    sick of thease wannabe gangsters
    all ya'll are just wanksters

    your a fucking disgrace to ya race
    dawg get the fuck out ma face

    when i finnished wit u ya gon be 6 foot deep
    all ya crew gon be dead or bleeding in da streets

    for sure dawg that a promice i can keep
    cuz all ya'll know that ya crew is weak

    to all ya *****s buggin
    who want to be thugin
    all i got to say is
    FUCK ALL YA"LL

    to all ma *****s gunnin
    and all ma *****s clubin
    all i got to say is
    i respect all ya'll
    Southern Intellect
    Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

    Prototype

    http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

  • #2
    uppin for feedback i will give rep for some feedback
    Southern Intellect
    Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

    Prototype

    http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

    Comment


    • #3
      not bad for 1st time, there is alot you can wrk on, i think that you should make your lins alil longer for a start dawg........ but not bad drop, u just ned to elevate (i could of been hash on that shit but i wont) peace
      Fo` REAL

      LIL .M. DJMC

      22 5


      touneyz won: 2

      Lil M is the H.N.I.C

      Comment


      • #4
        ^ wurd

        Comment


        • #5
          simple
          short
          playedout
          LOFLZ!!!!!!!!
          Originally posted by Splackavellie
          when you eatin pussy you real close to it anyways so why not....Shit i'll eat a bitches ass with a spoon if i got to..lol
          Originally posted by Tmaka2000
          i cant wait till i get laid

          Comment


          • #6
            wat dey sed^^^^
            Fo` REAL

            DeCeaST
            DJMC
            lil M




            Realizez- Infinate Soldier


            Originally posted by Pawl Derty
            U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
            Originally posted by J-Side
            Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

            Originally posted by Dirt Rich
            You definetely got balls

            Comment


            • #7
              aight thanks for the feedback uppin for some more
              Southern Intellect
              Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

              Prototype

              http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

              Comment


              • #8
                not bad man, the wanksta thing is kinda played out, but everyone still uses it

                Comment


                • #9
                  yea that like ma first freestyle but thanks for the pointers and shit yo
                  Southern Intellect
                  Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

                  Prototype

                  http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

                  Comment

                  Post ad widget 300x250

                  Collapse

                  LATEST POSTS

                  Collapse

                  Topics Statistics Last Post
                  Started by WesleyDrake, Today, 06:40 PM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post WesleyDrake  
                  Started by Deborahlanker, 05-06-2020, 03:07 AM
                  1 response
                  3 views
                  0 likes
                  Last Post Hellconjuror  
                  Started by hgjhguiov, Today, 08:51 AM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post hgjhguiov  
                  Started by stevenruiz, Today, 04:07 AM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post stevenruiz  
                  Started by Deborahlanker, Today, 02:51 AM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post Deborahlanker  
                  Started by Deborahlanker, Today, 02:43 AM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post Deborahlanker  
                  Started by Deborahlanker, Today, 02:37 AM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post Deborahlanker  
                  Started by bodytonketouk, Today, 12:42 AM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post bodytonketouk  
                  Started by bodytonketouk, Today, 12:40 AM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post bodytonketouk  
                  Started by Deborahlanker, Yesterday, 11:22 PM
                  0 responses
                  1 view
                  0 likes
                  Last Post Deborahlanker  
                  Working...
                  X