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    (talking)Hello America!!We truly need sum help, but whos gonna give it to us?(background)iono dawg(Me agin) Fuck!!!

    (verse 1)

    when you want help you best not take a hand out/
    or youll need more when later just be a man now/
    if im whack thenyour rilly tha worst/
    when i lace a track i sell erry word/
    cuz my adjectives brace you fir tha verbs/
    will my voice ever matter?not fir shir/
    but ill still use it wat you want ?my nerves/
    to hit tha fucking ceiling/
    because this shit i face and expressing my feelings/
    on this mutherfucking war that we're bound to fight/
    born with a pencil i must be bound to write/
    im bound to this never found my rights/
    does any1 find this shit to be alright?/

    (Chorus)
    where will we find the strength to stand up and fight/
    will we ever find the length to whats wrong and right/
    can we learn to start watchin out fir eachother /
    i no the answer as long as we hert our own baby mothers/

    (verse2)

    my tragedies are wat made a man of me/
    writin rymes unconstructed but glad to see/
    i am alive and will always be/
    lately theres alotta things/
    on my mind that i need to werk out/
    puttin up a fight is my way to shout/
    "this is not my war these are not my crimes/
    these are not my bars i didnt write these lines/
    i wish these fuckin pitcures werent on tha t.v/
    homies of homies homies diein gettin solt to me/
    if all these politicians are righ an im tha 1 wrong/
    wat tha fuckin meaning of me writin this song?/

    (Chorusx1)

    (Verse3)

    as i chew away to this.
    bullets is gettin sprayed to dis/
    any1 they can i see no feeling/
    missing all meaning/
    im sick of watching deth with meaningless pleading/
    im fleeing cuz im seeing these images and things/
    leaving me with this question"why these innocent pple and not me?"/

    (Beat drop)

    hey yall gimme sum feed took me 4 mins to write it so i no its bad i wanna make it better might record it
    FullBred

    I am tha don FullBled

  • #2
    thats prolly ur best
    Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
    The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
    Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
    Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
    MF Grimm

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    • #3
      yup even tho all ya shits " shit " lol
      www.facebook.com/rekne6
      www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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      • #4
        fuck you rekon an essential thank you..................i think
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        I am tha don FullBled

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        • #5
          ak read this you faggot





















          uppin this hot shit
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          I am tha don FullBled

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          • #6
            i read this like, a week ago man hehehhe whooooooooooooo its nice
            LastFM

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            • #7
              Originally posted by ThaLegendaryAK
              i read this like, a week ago man hehehhe whooooooooooooo its nice
              ? i just wrote it yesterday you accusing me of biting homie?
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              • #8
                no im accusing me of being to stoned to care "aboot" your song
                LastFM

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                • #9
                  ha ha
                  www.facebook.com/rekne6
                  www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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                  • #10
                    yo gonna get lot more feedbk if u dnt call ur freestyle, "shitty song i rote" lol but betta than ur rest
                    Fo` REAL

                    LIL .M. DJMC

                    22 5


                    touneyz won: 2

                    Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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                    • #11
                      Absolutely Horrible. How dare you call this "hot shit"?
                      ...THeREalM...


                      Beenz Audio...Click Here

                      Originally posted by DuPoint
                      i have listened to all ur shit b4 its hot
                      Originally posted by 50Caliber
                      yo...that some hot audio you got
                      .:Absolute Truth:.

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                      • #12
                        ^^^ wat dey sed
                        Fo` REAL

                        DeCeaST
                        DJMC
                        lil M




                        Realizez- Infinate Soldier


                        Originally posted by Pawl Derty
                        U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
                        Originally posted by J-Side
                        Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

                        Originally posted by Dirt Rich
                        You definetely got balls

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                        • #13
                          2 thigns were sed homie which 1 you agreein wit? lazy fuckin freeposters
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