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  • deetwelve and MC_Mace collab

    iight yall, heres the collab from me and MC_Mace

    (deetwelve)
    eeny meeny miney moe, cath a hot bitch by her toe/
    if she hollas then you know, that the hot bitch want some mo'/
    is how i wish was the way life goes, with streets filled with hoes/
    and see my future son watch the pretty toes as he grows/
    but instead all he'll see is voilence, bullets and destroyed fire hydrents/
    yellin shit at the bitch across the street till i put myself 2 silence/
    lookin at this brick wall, thinkin, man, wut the fuck have i been drinkin?/
    aw, fuck it, pull down my pants and start sprinklin, u no, tinklin/
    at the AAA with a cannibus block, ill eat it, then my glock/
    MC_Mace and i holdin it down, yeah, u hear all this sound?/
    Mace, come and show this muthafuckin bitch of an underground/

    (Chorus)
    (deetwelve)lifes a bitch and so is my hoe/
    i love but hate that bitch from head 2 toe/
    (MC_Mace)my life aint wat it used to be/
    bitches cryin an be leavin me/
    (deetwelve)we all know what thats like/
    as we cry, in our beds, mad at night/


    (Mc_Mace)
    1,2,3,4/
    get that bitches ass on tha flo'/
    bitch wanna hit me cuz my flow/
    ho wat up tho?/
    ill hit a muthafucka wit i knife cuz im bored/
    drop off his hed along tha willamette shore/
    oh my bad bak to tha bouncin booty on tha floor/
    see that shit be "what up whore"/
    hope i didnt say tha wrong thing get my ass booted out tha door/
    shit this bitch got thighs of thunda/
    the kind a homie like me wanta get unda/
    kinda shit i rip up make bleed gettin plundered/
    bak to tha word i sed i prolly shouldnta/
    sed cuz this bitches be givin no hed/
    i pled an pled a atear i shed/
    i want this bitch to be feed/
    with my dick cuz shee lookin stead/
    i-ly wantin some more/
    oh shit wheres tha under ground score/

    (chorus)
    Green
    Apples

    TAKE TWO ~ X-PLOSIV ~ EMMADA59 ~ DEETWELVE ~ GRAVEDIGGER ~ HEADHUNTER


    battle record:
    won:4
    lost:1
    KO:2
    TKO:1

    chant wit me: FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH...

  • #2
    nice chorus and all but mace i wasnt really feeling the end dee nice verse u all should do more
    A.K.A
    Invisibl Man302

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    • #3
      thnx homie, uppin this for more feedback
      Green
      Apples

      TAKE TWO ~ X-PLOSIV ~ EMMADA59 ~ DEETWELVE ~ GRAVEDIGGER ~ HEADHUNTER


      battle record:
      won:4
      lost:1
      KO:2
      TKO:1

      chant wit me: FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH...

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      • #4
        u need to extend them a bit more and gtet some better vocab
        www.facebook.com/rekne6
        www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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        • #5
          I agree ^^^

          Very good in all though. Well done
          UnItEd KiLlAz

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          • #6
            ^^^ wat dey sed....lol

            dee...dawg uve escalated so much....well done!!!
            Fo` REAL

            DeCeaST
            DJMC
            lil M




            Realizez- Infinate Soldier


            Originally posted by Pawl Derty
            U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
            Originally posted by J-Side
            Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

            Originally posted by Dirt Rich
            You definetely got balls

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            • #7
              wurd ^ .................................................. ..keep elevatin dawg u doin well
              Fo` REAL

              LIL .M. DJMC

              22 5


              touneyz won: 2

              Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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              • #8
                thats shit was hot dawg. stay up.

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                • #9
                  thnx, all yall. uppin this for some more feedback
                  Green
                  Apples

                  TAKE TWO ~ X-PLOSIV ~ EMMADA59 ~ DEETWELVE ~ GRAVEDIGGER ~ HEADHUNTER


                  battle record:
                  won:4
                  lost:1
                  KO:2
                  TKO:1

                  chant wit me: FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH...

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                  • #10
                    fo sho son, holla at my shit. New freestyle. Hope u read my old freestyles cause i asked if i should keep my style like that but no 1 answered that? Peace.

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                    • #11
                      iight, done. Uppin this some more yall
                      Green
                      Apples

                      TAKE TWO ~ X-PLOSIV ~ EMMADA59 ~ DEETWELVE ~ GRAVEDIGGER ~ HEADHUNTER


                      battle record:
                      won:4
                      lost:1
                      KO:2
                      TKO:1

                      chant wit me: FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH...

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                      • #12
                        shit our last wun was harder yall i liked my verse an dees shit i gotta read tha chorus tho
                        FullBred

                        I am tha don FullBled

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                        • #13
                          fuckin 1 minute shit ill rape this website

                          feelin tha chorus uppin this shit yall
                          FullBred

                          I am tha don FullBled

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                          • #14
                            nice drop i liked it,and yeah mc mace your line lenghts were a problem,you also could do with using more multi's...but i don't want to get picky............lol.
                            "Life Is A Form Of Annimated Death"


                            Battles/ 39
                            Wins/ 30
                            Ko's/ 22
                            Loses/ 9

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                            • #15
                              yo wut did u think of dees verse man?
                              Green
                              Apples

                              TAKE TWO ~ X-PLOSIV ~ EMMADA59 ~ DEETWELVE ~ GRAVEDIGGER ~ HEADHUNTER


                              battle record:
                              won:4
                              lost:1
                              KO:2
                              TKO:1

                              chant wit me: FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH, FUCK BUSH...

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