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  • Just Check It And Tell Me What You Think

    Aight now you mutherfuckas ain't believin me/
    I said I ain't even got a gun, now take a look and tell me what you see in me/
    Yeah bitch, I changed and now I look nothing like my fatha/
    You can call me the Don Dada as if I were the Ice Godda, pimpin Prada and chillin with my baby momma/
    Think I need a weapon, well I just gotta/
    Brand new revolva, think your's is nice, well mine's hotta/
    Shit I got the 9 and my trademark four sev/
    Poppin the 5-0 and laughing as they bleeding to death/
    Fuck hatin my dad I'm starting a new shit list/
    Come one, you know I hate a lot of you mutherfuckas not just a few bitch guests/
    First I'll start with the UK/
    Ain't all you little tricks fags? Yeah I heard all you gay/
    With your queer accents/
    I'll beat you to death and swear it was an accident/
    Yeah I turned hardcore over night/
    But it's not so I fit in, it's so I can stand up for myself in any kind of fight/
    Fuck, I could give a shit if you're scared or not/
    You probably ain't so let me help, I'll pull out my AK and gice you a fair shot/
    Watch out cuz I'm fast and furious like Vin Diesel/
    Girls look at my chest and say "Damn now that's diesel"/
    Price is no problem, I fill up my whip with strictly diesel/



    PS - No offense to people in UK I'm not trying to hate on yall, it just sorta popped into my head as I was thinking of shit to say. Peace.
    Peace 5 and 92, you're missed.

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    Aight come on guys, I wanna try to get better, so I need some criticism, whether it's good or bad, just hit me up with something. Your input is a lot.
    Peace 5 and 92, you're missed.

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    • #3
      Yo, THX fo tha good review on my shit.

      I think yos is tiight as well. I cant really judge since Im just a Newbie, but I think the only difference between yours and mine is that your rhymes are more drawn out and may be need a lil work on tha rhymin'. But its off tha hook though. Nice and long got me thinkin' bout tha rhymes you were writin'
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