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    Hey yo, Im new at this freestylin' shit so tell me what ya think.


    I got rhymes faster than a B-line/blow ya head off but still leave in time/to elude the police/i keep no peace as long as theres beef/my speech/is as clear and crisp as a freshly sliced piece of meat/no need/to fuck wit me/see/ill put you 6ft. deep/and still fire/flooded wit heat/cuz im hittin switches on bitches/ like snitches takin' pictures/my criteria is set for tha day/fuck yo bitch then leave your fuckin' house to spray.

    Like I said this was my 1rst time, so tell me what ya think.
    WESTCOAST

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    Not Bad Man

    Aight well I'm not expert at this shit, but I thought I might put in my 2 cents. I really don't think it's that bad. I especially liked this part...cuz im hittin switches on bitches/ like snitches takin' pictures..I think it's really good when you can rhyme with one word more then once. It could've been a little longer perhaps, maybe the verses a bit longer too. Just my opinion though. Check my lateset shit out on the Freestyle board and tell me what you think. Peace.
    Peace 5 and 92, you're missed.

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