I'm working on a verse over to beat to "Love Me" from the 8 Mile Sntrck. Gimme feedback, thanks.
I came in the game/
not lookin' for love, not looking for fame/
looking for a chance to spread my name/
one and the same/
and as a result, what did i gain?/
my name used in vain/
say i aint hot/
say i aint got the flame/
cause i will remain/
number 1 till the day that i'm slain/
switch up the flow/
and ill even rap for those that are slow/
whatta ya know, choppa's lyrics have stolen the show/
trust me on this one/
cause u dont wanna go toe to toe/
against choppa's lyrics,delivery/
or even his dough, whoops there i go/
talkin' fake and superficial/
bring it back though/
and ill rhyme like never before/
kick in the door, 200 bars, im spittin' hardcore/
i don't do hooks, rappin's enough of a chore/
I came in the game/
not lookin' for love, not looking for fame/
looking for a chance to spread my name/
one and the same/
and as a result, what did i gain?/
my name used in vain/
say i aint hot/
say i aint got the flame/
cause i will remain/
number 1 till the day that i'm slain/
switch up the flow/
and ill even rap for those that are slow/
whatta ya know, choppa's lyrics have stolen the show/
trust me on this one/
cause u dont wanna go toe to toe/
against choppa's lyrics,delivery/
or even his dough, whoops there i go/
talkin' fake and superficial/
bring it back though/
and ill rhyme like never before/
kick in the door, 200 bars, im spittin' hardcore/
i don't do hooks, rappin's enough of a chore/