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  • Rhyme I just wrote, what do ya think?

    I just wrote the first few lines for this project i'm working on and I was wondering what other people might think of it, so I though i'd post it up, tell me what you think?

    As We Get Older, Has She Yet, Colder than I ever was,
    Cause what she does hurts because sheís driving the hearse,
    Dragging my dead body in a coffin, coughing cause Iím alive,
    She can no longer drive the car shits bizarre why didnít I arrive,
    At heavenís gate, it wasnít white wait, it was red, maybe it was hell,
    I need to clean up my act before I get to know the devil oh too well.

    thanks for reading
    Julian: Listen, Ricky, you're only at school for one reason, and that's to sell drugs.

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