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  • GYNEE ..with a felt pen

    With a felt pen, I got ten million ways to kill men ,
    Either up on stage, or the side of their buildin /
    But it depends on how I'm feelin, so beware of this mic villian ,
    Cause when I throw flows colder than ice, I write killins /
    Despite children,
    My life is like a knife that's been inside of my eyes drillin ,
    Cause seen'in what I've seen is like a movie scene without film'in /
    I keep it real when, I'm speakin about my feelins, and willin ,
    To do what ever it takes to make a change in my billin /
    And wether it's top or not they got the spot light aimed right ,
    Cause I'm the local vocal that they hate on the mic /
    It doesn't matter by day, or in the deadest of nights ,
    I'll still kill without violence just by the way that I write .....

    { ..just a verse to somethin I'm still workin on....peace out}

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    that was pretty good for a beginner on this site^ =] keep elevating homie, try n use multies if u didnt, like i said i just skipped through it ^ , go in the ciphers and cipher pple off the top of yer head, and yer little rhyming dictionary in your brain will expand =] and read it to your self to see if it flows well.. like the syllables and words on each line, have em match with eachother^ so it flows nice =] neways.. im just tryin to help =\ if u know all this stuffff then my bad =] jusss tryin to help =] ! i'll rep ya later i cant rep ne-more today, hit me up wit a lil rep if ya want ;] -Peace
    -PeicyP

    "Shit wherever I want, can't deal with constipation." -WIZ

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