WHo WanTs To FucK wiTh Me ??? lmao

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

Take a deep breath and make sure you exhale,

The weapon on my case will send *****s to jail

I aint got no glock, Mina’s too pretty to trigger.

Blow you off like dirt. Reminisce my middle finger.

I ‘m a bad bitch. I-JUST-DON’T-GIVE-A-FUCK.

I’ll murder you right before your mind corrupts.

Comon’ your time is up. Lemmie go and speed it up.

Aint got shit one me? Thought you was a G? NA-UH!

You could be a thief and still couldn’t steal my Tidal

Got better chances competing in American idol.

But fuck it, I’m too busy grabbin’ checks and working out rates.

And the only click your known for is what your mouse makes.

See, I’m out and the open, Honesty’s familiar

So you better take it seriously when I say I’m gonna kill you.

I throw punches randomly and see what bitch it reaches.

And kill everyone around me like the days on tsunami beaches.

Hate me or love me, fuck the symphony

I’ve convinced ya’ll I’m the shit, Now whos with me?!

[CrazyAndProude]

I like pizza....*runs off*

[P5YCHO]

Aiiyo I want it wit u....

Live and direct from the moutha fuckin A it's P5YCHO
i'm bout ta rip it....

Yo u ask who want wit u and i answered it//
i make u sick like suckin on a fuckin cancer stick//
ya flow is garbarge and style just really sucks//
i know ya aim aint shit and i bet it's weak as fuck//
step back and take a real deep breath b4 u do this agian//
other wise u'll get murked and hurt i'm just sayin friend//
i take that back we aint friends but i can lyrically kill that's the end//
oh u want more well guess what u lil ho ya ho ass got it//
outta me and u the whole world know who's the hottest//
so just quit this shit b4 i get way 2 heated and way 2 potted//

how u like that bitch....

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

Oh you think yous FlY?
but then Why is your idole nina sky?
the uglist bitches alive, just arrived..on MY thread..
did you understand any word that i said..
I dont need a gun, my words can blow you dead..
and then i'll cage you in Satens cell..
there you go in the fiers of hell, is where you belong..
Biiitcchh your not even good enuff for the hooks in my song..
see, this wouldent have to happen if u didnt say shit..
yes my Rhymes* are sick..
you should of raped one of eminems shyt..
but instaed you choose to have Pussy fitt..
And did you say friends??
You gunna be kissin my ass when this shyt ends..
oh no p5yco is on her ragg..
no wonder shes gettin all mad..
maybe i shouldent diss her this bad....

LMAOO

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

you can respond now?


any feedbackk ppl??

[Stonezz]

your lines looks shaky
whut happen you shook?
mc's like u needa read *freestylin for dummies* i hear its a good amateur book
u say ur rhymes r sick
dat a lie my lines shatter ur insides like a toothpick
u cant battle afta dis
cat got ur tounge
dont try and resist before u blow out a lung

holla

[justrude88]

i think YoUDonTknoWMeE is betta

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

yeah just rude said it ...

[*Roxanne]

I don't know you
and I cant say I wish I did

naw jk
im playing
im not a emcee or textcee
but that was pretty good,
peace
Roxy

[Frozen North]

They were both pretty weak.

Why would even bother including 4 lines that didnt rhyme:


"I ‘m a bad bitch. I-JUST-DON’T-GIVE-A-FUCK.
I’ll murder you right before your mind corrupts.
Comon’ your time is up. Lemmie go and speed it up.
Aint got shit one me? Thought you was a G? NA-UH!"

G and Me were the only hints of rhymes I could find in there.
Let's not forget this non-rhyming line either:

"See, I’m out and the open, Honesty’s familiar
So you better take it seriously when I say I’m gonna kill you."


p.s. It's title, not tidal.

[*Roxanne]

dayum class started already
i think ill make a thread so f. n can school me to since noone answers any of my questions and shit

[Frozen North]

Lol, it's time someone around here gave her some real feedback.
Class is in session.

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

i meantt See, I’m out and the open, Honesty’s familiar
So you better take it seriously when I say I’m gonna kill yaa*****."


lmaoo ..i didntt even mean WHo WANTS TO FUCK W/ ME..
i just wanted that for my title..of the rhymms
but peple wanted to stepp so i dont have a problem with batteling

[*Roxanne]

Lol, it's time someone around here gave her some real feedback.
Class is in session.

imma start a thread ..i hate to..but anyways look for it and u have gave me feed before if u dont remember I took it well.

[Frozen North]

I know, you're one of the only people that didn't wet their pants when I didn't give them rave reviews. I'll keep it honest and constructive.