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  • Freestyle--gallant warrior feedbacks please

    was pretty bored

    A gallant warrior sent down to earth for peacekeeping priorities
    Craze, death, and hatred, people acting like wild coyotes
    People hating on each other, and having that acrid feeling
    sent down to earth to help with the healing
    Infested criminals, brainwashed from the wrong to the wicked
    fuck it, recovered from the ice age, but the world is all frigid
    Use your talent, tear up the world and furthermore fuck up the planet
    He sees the poor from the rich,
    The poor... yea we left dem, a glitch in the system
    Africa the country where everyone works like pawns
    Building bombs, and engaging in war we give them no response
    Murdering for a payroll, we got blood in our eyes
    Looking at the very soul of the victim, is an angel in disguise
    He wonders what happened to the humanity that there once was
    Instead he sees the sanity that we once lost
    No excuse to explain this phenomena that will kill us one day
    sick people raping little kids with their pajamas on
    He leaves a smirk on his face as he ridicules us and shakes his head in dismay
    Different visions on life, differentiated from picking up a book or a knife
    No hope.. he thinks in an instant an infant is born to be a servant to the devil
    drop the anvil as we stoop to a different level.
    Lack of good sense, the father of all our problems
    Pregnant teens at the age of fourteen because of no condom
    Donít show no remorse, no pity on them
    Suddenly he doesnít have the urge to give a helping hand
    He takes on last look at the earth that could have met ends
    He retreats like the taliban, and ascends.
    When ni66az Hate I just tell dem I'm a smart ni66a wit Motives
    Bust ni66az in da face the size of da holes in sliced green olives
    When dey ask for my IQ i say
    180 im dat smart so im here to stay

  • #2
    not bad, work on ur flow and multies, keep it up man
    "We gotta have fun now, there's only minutes left..."

    R.I.P.

    BIG PROOF

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    • #3
      What do you mean Multis? sorry my first freestyle
      When ni66az Hate I just tell dem I'm a smart ni66a wit Motives
      Bust ni66az in da face the size of da holes in sliced green olives
      When dey ask for my IQ i say
      180 im dat smart so im here to stay

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      • #4
        Pretty nice, keep it up

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        • #5
          very nice man, keep it up
          \

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          • #6
            well, multies are more than one word or syllable that rhyme, for exaple:

            fat bitch/ fast lane/
            catfish/ or last name/

            get it?


            and this is real good for a first frestyle, keep it up
            "We gotta have fun now, there's only minutes left..."

            R.I.P.

            BIG PROOF

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            • #7
              lol
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              • #8
                Yup, Thats What It Is

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