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    ight yo check it
    my first freetsyle ever its gonna be about columbine
    (i am potraying myself as the devil)

    Eric Harris heres the mack you can have it
    cuz when im at it you faggits can only grasp it
    no need for mask kid shoot up the school you crazy bastarrd
    12 guage shotgun-shits so hot son
    leave 20 dead 23 leave hurt
    20 r 6 feet underneath the durt
    23 r seein stars and little cartoon birds
    you heard?
    but im not done yet-the shotgun aint run out yet
    splatter your own brains and hand it off to dylan next
    both of yous are monsters should be compared 2 t-REX
    peaple are sayin me next-im the devil and ill never bex hexed
    april 20th will never be forgotton
    only if i dint get those kids into what i gotten
    and make that 22 year old sell them the shotgun
    my ways only evil kids follow mine
    good goin eric nd dylan shootin up columbine

    i dunno i tried so if u can just give me feedback...this was my first ever thx - peaceee

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    ummm the concept was pretty good but i felt the structure let you down. Hope it helps, im pretty sure frozen north will tell ya some more useful shit.
    I feel like i'm in hong kong the way they wanna make this "singapore"- Chino XL

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    • #3
      That was good but it kinda sounded like to be that you got some stuff of eminem. and your a beginner so for a begginer i'd give you 7/10
      OH HAI!

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      • #4
        no odubt thx...nd nah no stuff of eminem lol how would u see it as that ?

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        • #5
          I read it again and i got a feelin theres some 50 cent in there now ohhhh i dunno man it was good anyway
          OH HAI!

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          • #6
            welcome to the game and that flow was off the hook at all times *****
            FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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            • #7
              werd^^ what he said
              weLcome
              peace
              Roxanne

              *The FreeStyLe Church*

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