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'Clocks Ticking' *FULL VERSION....WORTH THE READ...LEAVE FEED*

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  • *VisioN*
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    uppin

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  • Frozen North
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    [Insert generic bad feedback here].

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  • *VisioN*
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    haha i believed you..............or do i? 1o1

    thanks man i repped you

    uppin

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  • G-12
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    lol, lemme give u saum detailed feedback then:

    chorus was off the chain, i liked it

    my favorite line was:
    sittin here with the gun wondering if ill reach heaven or not

    ^^that was hot

    anywaysss, hot song, enjoyed it, can't wait on sum more of ur shit

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  • *VisioN*
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    grrr did you even read it!!!! 1o1

    thnx


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  • G-12
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    hot shit, as usual, keep it up

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  • *VisioN*
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    Grrrrr

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  • *VisioN*
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    dammit

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  • *VisioN*
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    uppin

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  • 'Clocks Ticking' *FULL VERSION....WORTH THE READ...LEAVE FEED*

    (Verse 1)
    i am moments from the escape of life with hate
    everywhere i take a look the passion for fate escalates
    its hard to make a mistake into a positive phase
    mean how could i? bein in a world thats a crazed maze
    want to be praised but my ways do not amaze me
    just makes me crazy growing up still acting like a baby
    cant live for my dreams theres a wall blocking me
    want to die my finger on the trigger is whats stopping me
    wanna pull it but my senses tell me i have chances
    to make advances that will send me past the circumstances
    don't know if i should comprehend with my insides
    my mind keeps switching sides too hard for me to decide
    whats actually wrong and what may possibly be right
    but if i really want to die then my last opportunity is tonight

    (Chorus)
    the clocks ticking as well as my death
    knowing i am seconds away from having my last breath
    should i stop now and live un-respected
    or should i put myself in a place where i wont be rejected

    (Verse 2)
    hands from the clock on the dot hittin eleven o'clock
    sittin here with the gun wondering if ill reach heaven or not
    put the barrel in my mouth crying and holding it steady
    shoulda pulled it already but my guts saying that i aint ready
    knowin my decision could end my life full of hostility
    no one can tell me to pull the trigger it is my responsibility
    my ability to know differences between good and bad
    hoping for no one to witness the troubled life that i have had
    sweat is going down my face my hands have trembled
    if i shoot now aint a toy so theres no way i can be reassembled
    but what have i got to lose? no job, food, or any money
    and no honey when i am out and about damn sun is never sunny
    never gettin shined upon each day keep getting sicker
    mentality is gettin bigger hopefully it'll change if i pull the trigger (BANG)

    *silence for a moment.....then chorus starts up*

    *Chorus*

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