'Clocks Ticking' *FULL VERSION....WORTH THE READ...LEAVE FEED*

[*VisioN*]

uppin

[Frozen North]

[Insert generic bad feedback here].

[*VisioN*]

haha i believed you..............or do i? 1o1

thanks man i repped you

uppin

[G-12]

lol, lemme give u saum detailed feedback then:

chorus was off the chain, i liked it

my favorite line was:
sittin here with the gun wondering if ill reach heaven or not

^^that was hot

anywaysss, hot song, enjoyed it, can't wait on sum more of ur shit

[*VisioN*]

grrr did you even read it!!!! 1o1

thnx


uppin

[G-12]

hot shit, as usual, keep it up

[*VisioN*]

Grrrrr

[*VisioN*]

dammit

[*VisioN*]

uppin

[*VisioN*]

(Verse 1)
i am moments from the escape of life with hate
everywhere i take a look the passion for fate escalates
its hard to make a mistake into a positive phase
mean how could i? bein in a world thats a crazed maze
want to be praised but my ways do not amaze me
just makes me crazy growing up still acting like a baby
cant live for my dreams theres a wall blocking me
want to die my finger on the trigger is whats stopping me
wanna pull it but my senses tell me i have chances
to make advances that will send me past the circumstances
don't know if i should comprehend with my insides
my mind keeps switching sides too hard for me to decide
whats actually wrong and what may possibly be right
but if i really want to die then my last opportunity is tonight

(Chorus)
the clocks ticking as well as my death
knowing i am seconds away from having my last breath
should i stop now and live un-respected
or should i put myself in a place where i wont be rejected

(Verse 2)
hands from the clock on the dot hittin eleven o'clock
sittin here with the gun wondering if ill reach heaven or not
put the barrel in my mouth crying and holding it steady
shoulda pulled it already but my guts saying that i aint ready
knowin my decision could end my life full of hostility
no one can tell me to pull the trigger it is my responsibility
my ability to know differences between good and bad
hoping for no one to witness the troubled life that i have had
sweat is going down my face my hands have trembled
if i shoot now aint a toy so theres no way i can be reassembled
but what have i got to lose? no job, food, or any money
and no honey when i am out and about damn sun is never sunny
never gettin shined upon each day keep getting sicker
mentality is gettin bigger hopefully it'll change if i pull the trigger (BANG)

*silence for a moment.....then chorus starts up*

*Chorus*