Who stepping up?

[Blaze87]

Yo, u fuckin bitches stay playing these games.
It aint kool 2 fuck w/ sumtin that can’t b tamed.
Don’t talk shit unless u wanna get ya A$$ whooped.
If u walk alone @ night,
Betta prepares yaself 4 a fright.
Cuz I aint even on ya sight.
Can’t be detected by any hi-tech radar.
Bust ya shit & leave u fighting 4 ya life.
U wanna pop that shit, come 2 my land.
The place is blazing hip-hop + R&B.
Betta watch out 4 them Killer B’s.
I don’t talk shit unless I can back it up.
Compared 2 me, yalls strength aint stacking up.
U don’t wanna fuck w/ my head,
Cuz ull end ^ dead.
It’d be betta 2 pop off instead.
It won’t hurt by how fast I’ll put u 2 bed.
Fuck off, unless u wanna get plowed by that lead.

[Hook] 2 xs
Yo, u don’t wanna fuck w/ me.
Cuz ima psycho.
U’ll neva c another light of day.
If I got 2 have shit my way.
So fuck off, cuz my gats bout 2 spray.

If u don’t wanna lie,
In that spot where u stand.
Then stop acting like u that hot man.
Bow down & call me ya master.
Cuz there’s a hospital bed that got ya name on it.
Look whose in the psych ward.
Cuz it’s flying demons that u saw, that’s wut u claimed.
Come closer, it aint pitch dark.
So hopefully u don’t get burned by my flames.
Hell, I haven’t even completely gone insane.
U used 2 be my *****, but now u my broke hoe.
Gimme my fuckin money bitch, now it’s your turn 2 goes.

[Hook]

Bit through my cage w/ my teeth.
& I aint go full beast.
Got unsuspecting victims,
Hearing my chains rattling, cuz I’m carrying my leash.
I aint soft, I just feel bad cuz u got me pissed off.
Fuck w/ me when im calm, then when im focused,
The strength aint nowhere near the closest.
U wanna play these games,
Game over 4 u, bet u won’t be the same.
Write my name w/ ya blood on the wall,
Leave u face ^, so u cant c what’s starting 2 crawl.
U aint going nowhere, so turn off them waterworks,
Who u tryna shake w/ them tears?
Not even ice can stop me.
But that don’t mean I’m cocky.
That’s cuz when it come 2 rhymes, can’t no1 top me.
Hell that’s better than revenge.
Im bringing u 2 skool,
& Showing u that fucking w/ Blaze just aint cool.
Have u so scared, ya boys pissed in there pants 2.

[Hook] (I)

[C-J-Buck]

man i read the first 8 lines of that and it was wack as fuck

Step back boy and make your self a name,
before you step up and try and make it in this game,
one thing your lusting for comes served with pain,
coz its battles like this that gets you slain,
compare you whole song, to my few lines
and you might be able to fix together a few meaningfull rhymes,
coz i kill you and make ya face look burnt,
so others can learn from the lesson that you learnt

whut

[C-J-Buck]

cmon people comment!!

[<<Kels>>]

lol!! the 1st dude's weak as fuck. Second guy's was ahite

[Blaze87]

whoa whoa whoa, listen lil boi, y u tryna step ^,
cuz u fuckin w/ me, & u might get choked tha fuck ^.
*****z like u talk that shit, but i left yall behind.
killin yall aint even worth my time.
look my nympho, dont get teabagged like my last hoe.
u said my shit aint all that, but u aint comin ^ w/ nuttin betta.
u all up on my dick, but u the 1 who owe me, so where my cash @?
i kno u cant finish me. u mad cuz of how hot i b.
u wanna bring that shit, ***** bring it.
but its already been brought up. i made yo punk ass.
so come here my sperm, daddy bout 2 whoop ya ass,
go 2 hell man, cuz u neva gonna learn.

[#1KILLA]

this criticism man dont take shit personally...

the rhyme scheme was simple... like rhymin "name & game".. come on man...
flow, now that wasn't too bad
lyrics... well they have all been done the things you said so nothin particularly original...
the theme was well played out...
bout it...

[Frozen North]

It's called a fucking comma. Jesus crist what is it with you retards, "..." is not a comma you dumbshits. I learned that when I was like 8 years old, now either I was an AMAZINGLY bright 8 year old or you are a stupid 16-25 year old, take your pick.

[C-J-Buck]

Origannly posted by Blaze87: whoa whoa whoa, listen lil boi, y u tryna step ^,
cuz u fuckin w/ me, & u might get choked tha fuck ^.
*****z like u talk that shit, but i left yall behind.
killin yall aint even worth my time.
look my nympho, dont get teabagged like my last hoe.
u said my shit aint all that, but u aint comin ^ w/ nuttin betta.
u all up on my dick, but u the 1 who owe me, so where my cash @?
i kno u cant finish me. u mad cuz of how hot i b.
u wanna bring that shit, ***** bring it.
but its already been brought up. i made yo punk ass.
so come here my sperm, daddy bout 2 whoop ya ass,
go 2 hell man, cuz u neva gonna learn.

im not a N**** man

[Blaze87]

Blaze vs a bitch ass mofo

Im doin tha Blood walk all ova ya grave.
Step ^ if u wanna play, im all bout mind games.
Sending u some "get well" cards,
cuz I got u lyin in the hospital bed.
This the pound bitch & ima put u 2 sleep.
***** im the only beast in this bitch.
Stop u out like a cigarette butt,
u conceited muthafucker, and I don’t give a f.uck.
Im the 1 who invented the burner,
but i see you just a slow learner.
& U got buckteeth bigger than Timmy Turner.
Don’t talk that s.hit bout how u the king,
cuz i took ova ya throne,
ya girl wanted me, that’s y she left u alone.
My knuckles iz bloody from pounded ya face.
Erased ya CD, & had yo broke A$$ cryin like Mase.
Shut the f.uck ^, 4 my gun go off in yo face.
Blackmailin ya A$$ cuz i got it all on tape.
Don’t get tight cuz my s.hit off the chain.
Smack ya punk A$$ w/ yo peanut brain.
Or u mad or have u just gone completely insane.
Crack yo face & ya jaw,
don’t b like Alejandra & get caught by the law.
Doin the blood walk all over ya face.
& S.hit in yo mouth, cuz i know u'll like the taste.
U tryna b tha captain, but where ya team?
They saw me, & ran like they were in a race.
Got u so scared have u runnin in place.
Finish u off w/ the inferno diver,
& that’s the end of this case.
& The gun iz goin off in ya face <POW> !!!! (wagtailsm

[Blaze87]

if i cared id tell u that u aint blk

[G h O s T]

^^ You are truly horrible, quit rap

[#1KILLA]

It's called a fucking comma. Jesus crist what is it with you retards, "..." is not a comma you dumbshits. I learned that when I was like 8 years old, now either I was an AMAZINGLY bright 8 year old or you are a stupid 16-25 year old, take your pick.

was that to me, because "..." means continuing, where as a comma is a slight pause that doesnt extend to the fact of startin a new sentence. Faggot. shut the fuck up.

[Blaze87]

ok who is every1 talkin 2 cuz after a while, it gets confusin & that dumb bitch sayin a cant rap needs 2 shut that fuck up or do sumtin about it, cuz hell get killed in the fuckin process, dont get mad bitch cuz im betta den u

[justrude88]

lol I wonder where this shit will go. Keep goin I'm watching. The popcorn ain't done yet so don't do something that I'll regret missing.

[Red Lantern]

Bitch you’re the only one who’s playing a fucking game
You don’t even rhyme, you’re English teacher is the one to blame
You’re a fucking pussy you can be tamed
You cant fight an ant you should be ashamed
So when im walking alone in the dark, will I be in for a fright
I will be indeed, when I see that ugly face of yours that looks like shite
I know that radar cant detect you , as luck would have it
Radar cant detect a smelly piece of shit
Ok ill go to your fucking land
And fuck up your pituitary gland
It aint blazing hip hop, its blazing pop
Ill eat you up like a mutton chop
Watch out for fucking killer bees
Shut up your testicles are as small as peas
We all know why you want to put me into bed
Youre hoping that ill give you head