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    Man, somethings you got on here are right//
    If i got such a small dick, why'd she take a big bite?//
    Exactly, my thoughts, you jus creatin fake beef//
    To ture, any1 can tell you bullshit like tha maple leaf//
    Peace keeps they say Canadians are//
    Have u pussies chopped up like that monsta saw//
    Except, ima do it myslef, cuz im tha real Stone Cold Killa//
    Ima give ya girl tha XXX Doctor treatment, special cum filla//
    Give her tooth burhs to wash out tha paste//
    She loved me so much, I had ta give her a taste//
    N this gangsta in his permeditated phaze//
    Be like you when u O.D.'ed after a blaze//
    Bitch, that's ma nickname, Blaze, get it straight//
    Either u on ma safe list, or times cum 2 ur fate//
    5 Bullets in tha chest for you//
    Homie, next stop is ya girls house, gon fuck ya "boo"//
    I'll blow ya dead body up at the funeral//
    Show how sick i am in this game of Imunerals//
    This shit aint like gang wars, it's face to face//
    If you aint man enough, go back to hiding like tha fag mase//
    This aint no "Toys R'Us shit//
    It's like East an West, i'll cut ya face bitch//
    Beef real, jus walk away, n' i'll lay back//
    Ma gun handle cocked ready for a pistol smack//
    N' 2 ur ugly ass mug posted on tha wall-//
    Of fags caled "Hoes Of Biggie Smalls"//
    N' when u headin home, you'l be hearin "Certified Gangsta"//
    Next thing you know, you'll be dead an known as the "Dead Wanksta"//
    Then ima call ya girl, see if she wanna pussy poppin//
    Ride ova in my cadillac, give her a nice Icin Toppin//
    Ya see, ***** im off tha chain//
    My lyrics bring me more shit than u and ur shame//
    Im colder than killa, more fiery than pac//
    Ima waste ya ass so bad, u aint neva gon talk//
    Shit, I shot a few pigs, shanked a few wiggas//
    Call in ya wanksta crews AKA *****s//
    Nah, i ain INjustified//
    Im Justified//
    Im Blaze, Im Permifried//
    E-u got tha shit, gon put us in tha phaze//
    Call is Easy-Blaze, cuz we tha main craze//

    Got more, since I started writing a little while back!
    Rate and give commments to how i can make this shit better. Thanks
    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...n/BlazeSig.jpg

  • #2
    for your first try that was pretty good... take the first bar for example..

    "Man, somethings you got on here are right//
    If i got such a small dick, why'd she take a big bite?//"

    thats a fairly ok punch...

    flow was on point..
    multies, not spectacular but, try to make them slightly more complicated and with a pun..

    overall i'd say that was a good effort.. keep it up
    SpurattiK

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    • #3
      Aight..Thanks. I wrote some more...Please Please Rate. And im really having trouble with these multies..It just doesn't flow the wat i wanted it to so i changed it up..

      Bitch im unbeatable, untouchable, an un-rapped//
      Im like a ghost, cuz i can't be capped//
      Ya'll white boys gettin all up in our faces//
      Shut em up, they truned white like Carmellos Laces//
      Pure white, pure pale, pure pussy//
      Jus like ya ma's pussy, cept u more wussy//
      N u tryin ta rap like we 50 & G-Unit//
      Dun make me b like E an jus loose it//
      Now compare yourself, me against you//
      U couldn't rap even wid da book "Raps 4 Dummies X2// ( HeHe, kinda funny)
      Cuz bitch, i'll put in a hole in you//
      Put ya mo pain than 50 went thorugh//
      Not with guns or gats, but with lyrical knives//
      I'll stab ya once, n scratch away 1 of ya 9 lives//
      Pussy ass bitch, what you gonna do now?//
      Ur silenced, n the whole crowds liek "wow"//
      This brown mufucka actually capped a masta//
      A masta's who's lyrical is much much fasta//
      Got u frontin, 2 stuntin, on a lryical flow//
      Got u humpin, still bumpin, on the fukin prostitute road// (Damn Man-Whores LOL)
      N ur rhymes may, be, out of control//
      But mine so bad, im on lyrical parole// (Uh-oh :P)
      http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...n/BlazeSig.jpg

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      • #4
        Upin...Please Rate n give feedback on how to make this better..
        Appreciate it...
        http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...n/BlazeSig.jpg

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        • #5
          First and last? Alas my dreams are shattered by a second post.

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          • #6
            Fuck Yo Hatin Ass^
            BADNEWZ
            JustRude-Joker Boy-Young Rice

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            • #7
              Tissue for the cry baby?

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              • #8
                i'm just tired of yo bitch ass hatin of everybody. you got all dat fuckin mouth and prolly can't even fight or nothin. u prolly some spoiled as kid that ain't got shit to do but harrass motherfuckers on the net.I think you need to get a real life b4 some1 takes the pointless one that you have
                BADNEWZ
                JustRude-Joker Boy-Young Rice

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                • #9
                  Take a look in the mirror son. You're crying over the internet because someone is picking on you. Suck it up and take it like a man.

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                  • #10
                    ya right. I'm fucking laughing at yo ass. You talk shit like you the motherfucking king. shit keep dreaming n!gga
                    BADNEWZ
                    JustRude-Joker Boy-Young Rice

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                    • #11
                      I asked for feed, not some fucking gimp arguing bullshit...
                      http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...n/BlazeSig.jpg

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