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    ill make u shiver so much that your skin turns to ice//
    slice your throat so now you need a breathing device//
    so go ahead take one of my lyrics and make it a quote//
    say it was something you wrote and have to promote//
    i want the green hopped on pills made from caffeine//
    im a machine that makes you higher than a trampoline//
    yea i have a budget and im not taking about car rental//
    am i mental show no emotion so fuck being sentimental//
    i have a dream scheme need help for it to pick up steam//
    i need a supreme regime of a team with high self esteem//
    so heres the master plan takeover japan driving a minivan//
    hope its no disaster scan and they cant see us like a blindman//
    so im a prequel who never had a sequel so am i equal to people//
    your dull your never on point cuz im sharper than a steeple//

    so yea heres 7 bars of me jsut freestyiling.let me know what u think
    Last edited by Dirtyjoey; 03-22-2005, 08:00 PM.

  • #2
    haha, pretty good man, 8/10 keep at it
    "We gotta have fun now, there's only minutes left..."

    R.I.P.

    BIG PROOF

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    • #3
      thanx man i still have tp spread around more rep before given it to you so sorry bout that

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      • #4
        upin

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        • #5
          uppin

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          • #6
            Good good, but try to woerk on your flow a bit more (have about the same amount of syllables in each line, best between 10-14) also try to stay away from the "Money, Cars and Hoes" thing, you started good but eventually you lost flow and just started rhyming cliché's
            Keep it up!

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            • #7
              your vocab is nice, and your multies are pretty hot. Your metaphors are soso so are your punches, but yeah otherwise its pretty good. 7.5/10
              I feel like i'm in hong kong the way they wanna make this "singapore"- Chino XL

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