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    you'll be so amazed you cant applaud//
    when i sleigh your ass like santa claus//
    headaches from fanta tours, rampant gore///
    blood wakes in each stanza--- torn//
    look up, your about to get jumped twice //
    bumpin ice, infronta 'ghetto mice'//
    they was runnin from these cats//
    freezin up up like spellin B snaps//
    im witnissin death, and spreadin hate//
    finishin shit, and decrypting space//
    incrypted waits, infringing gates//
    hellish apartments, runnin so far its//
    like i was chasin metaphors //
    im wastin simalees, looking into these//
    looking through a 40 ounce double D //
    i AM trouble see! do exactly what i mean//
    i found my way through the maze//
    hellbound , screams, but my image stays//

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    (i italicized the important parts of the metaphors)

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    • #3
      The wordplay and metaphors seem cool. I just didn't get some of of the lines. Your flow seems on point when I rapped the verse, but I'm not good at that shit, so I don't really know.
      P!

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