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  • My Freestyle

    THis is my freestyle for everyone to hear
    so sit back and smoke a bowl and then grab a beer
    cuz this is some lyrically mastery before your eyes
    and dont think im gonna step up and try to battle one of those experienced guys
    this is my freestyle so everyone can laugh
    at a young white boy from the midwest for trying to be an MC
    my name is erase cuz i like nothing negative
    erase the world of all the negative issues, wouldnt that be tight
    we need some positive vibrations within the rap game, cuz peace is alright
    so everyone who packs the heat should listen up
    dont be so aggressive with your words you all think your G'd up
    but you ain't nothin but illiterate fools who think that you can get anything you want with your gat in your lap
    thats not reality homie, thats all on MTV and not on the street
    peace is the answer to the worlds problems
    so yall better exchange your guns for some killa kali weed buds
    MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE
    www.myspace.com/mcerase
    MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

  • #2
    Didn't really rhyme, and your flow was off.

    This piece ain't gonna be taken seriously as a rap, but I thought the stream of consciousness you were expressing was interestin.

    Peace

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    • #3
      ok thanks for the constructive criticism
      MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE
      www.myspace.com/mcerase
      MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

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      • #4
        yeah, I like yo verse too, you got your own style
        you aint gotta try to be like 8 mile
        do your own thang always be original
        people on this web site can be overly critical
        but fuck all that, this is bout freestyle rhymin
        whoever's tryin to be Paula Abdul or Simon
        can eat a dick sandwich with no mayo or mustard
        lay low or trust this, I'm a k.o you busters
        keep Erasing fools with the back of yo pencil
        or stab em with the lead part if thats what ya into
        I love rhymin and all of hip hop in general
        so tell all them haters to stay off the genitals

        One love - keep doin yo thizzle

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        • #5
          its iight but give it a lil touch up here n there
          ~/-<((((LaDy-IcE))))>-\~

          "Interrupt the cipher unannounced and you'll get punched in the mouth"
          -Canibus
          "Its not the contents of the pill...its da side-effects"

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