[Off Tha Hook]Keystyle...Gotta Love Em' Multies

[Tha_Rookie]

Seems A Lot Of Ya'll Like Em' "Multies" So Best Get Ready...

Foul And Hated,Worst And Greatest Lines,Time To Face It
Previously Stated With Jagged Rhymes Engraved It So Ya Cant Erase It

Left My Mark Since I Degraded You Before The Start
Take Shots In The Dark My Bite Is Worse Then My Bark

Splits Lesson Pull Out The Smith Wesson The Determiner If Later Ya In Hell Or Heaven
Don't Push Me and Quit Testing Buckled knees Get ya Quickly Confessen MC That Feel Greater Than 7

Caused Abortions To Rip Out Perportions, More Pain than Dieing Orphans
One Hit Ya Becomeing Contortioned And have Your Brain Forced In

I got A Passion To Put More Red In Your Fashion Got Ya Wiplashion
Nobody Is Passin Like broken Down Bridges Ya Left With Tax Action

[FaZe-d]

Militia Homies, we runnin shit...

Nice drop Rook...

[snyper0512]

Nice drop dawg, wether we crew or Not, ur rhymez is Hot!

[Helmz]

They said it ^

[Tha_Rookie]

Hahaha Thanks Everyone Ayo Helmz Ima Get @ you For Collab

[Helmz]

ight holmes

[Morphine]

i thought multi's were like multiple words of 2 different lines it's a tight fucken rap but someone explain to me if i am wrong

[Tha_Rookie]

There are Multiple rhyming words in a line but a real one is multiple sylabbels

[DustiDue]

Multi is short for Multi-Syllable rhyming.
Examples:
This is a multi: (two (or more) words rhyming with two (or more) words)
blablabla crap fuck//
blablabla slap suck//

This is a multi: (One multi-syllable word rhyming with another multi syllable word, or other words)
blablabla hamburger//
blablabla send-further//

This is a multi: (murliple rhyming words in a line/bar)
bla wack bla sack//
bla jack bla lack//

This is a multi: (different rhyming words in a line/bar)
bla you bla fuck//
bla true bla suck//

^just weak examples but you know what I mena, and ofcourse you can use multiple sorts of them in one bar...that;s even better,...

[Dirtyjoey]

nice shit man

[Tha_Rookie]

Thanks Dirty upin'

[oscarpmr]

[B]Foul And Hated,Worst And Greatest Lines,Time To Face It
Previously Stated With Jagged Rhymes Engraved It So Ya Cant Erase It

Left My Mark Since I Degraded You Before The Start
Take Shots In The Dark My Bite Is Worse Then My Bark

Splits Lesson Pull Out The Smith Wesson The Determiner If Later Ya In Hell Or Heaven

^^I like these 5 lines.

Don't Push Me and Quit Testing Buckled knees Get ya Quickly Confessen MC That Feel Greater Than 7

^^WTF is this?

Caused Abortions To Rip Out Perportions, More Pain than Dieing Orphans
One Hit Ya Becomeing Contortioned And have Your Brain Forced In

^^I like it

I got A Passion To Put More Red In Your Fashion Got Ya Wiplashion
Nobody Is Passin Like broken Down Bridges Ya Left With Tax Action

^^Again wtf

Now this is only my opinion so dont get all shirty and start bitch'n.
Whats it about , what is the meaning. Its just a bunch of rhyming lines
put together that dont mean shit. But I did like the first 5 lines.
So dont be hatin its only my opinion.

[Tha_Rookie]

[B]
Don't Push Me and Quit Testing Buckled knees Get ya Quickly Confessen MC That Feel Greater Than 7
^^WTF is this?

I got A Passion To Put More Red In Your Fashion Got Ya Wiplashion
Nobody Is Passin Like broken Down Bridges Ya Left With Tax Action

^^Again wtf

It's Cool It's An Opinion But i'll Explain Those Lines For Ya, First One Buckled Knees Means Your On Your Knees So Praying/Confessen Is The Same And MC Fell Is What I Mean And The MC's That Have Feel To ME Is Greater Than 7

The Second One Blood Colors Red And The Whiplash From that Punch, ANd A Broken Bridge No One Can Pass ANd Tax Action Is What YOu Use To Re Open It I Hope That Helped

[oscarpmr]

Its all good , cheers Rookie.
Btw I dont think Im some madd rapper or anything Im far from it Im just on here
havin fun. I was just offering some unbiased feedback .

Also Im an Aussie so our grammer and terms are very different .

Peace.

[Tha_Rookie]

its coo thanks for peeping this:D