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  • im not really a rapper but check it

    I be the blast from the past the only one to last,
    this game with no name when anyone's out oh so fast,
    on the mic some say i drop bombs like shady,
    on the court i take over like tracy mcgrady,
    one's hard deep rough rap rhymes earn them a name in the game,
    i guarantee i dont got a spot cuz im not the same,
    it dont matter to me cuz it dont mean nothin,
    i got everything i need in this life im luvin,
    i love it im straight outta the country just like buck,
    too many people just plain and simply dont care about nothing they just dont give a fuck,
    thats the number 1 reason why so many artists suck,
    money money money damn thats what runs our lives,
    people be needin it so they rob plus threaten others w/knives,
    i can see it its clear they tryin to hide their fear,
    they hatin and discriminatin on others all damn year,
    this writers block is startin to get to me,
    this shits difficult but thats what its supposed to be

    god damn i couldnt think!!! i dont really like it but tell me what u think. thanks.
    Last edited by LPShady825; 03-28-2005, 04:32 PM.
    "Victims, aren't we all?" -Brandon Lee (The Crow)

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    i edited one little line. no difference thou. does anyone have any comments??
    "Victims, aren't we all?" -Brandon Lee (The Crow)

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    • #3
      well it wasnt too bad, too improve you gotta try to not rhyme so many words, i mean the first line there's 3 words all rhyme, it's good if you do it every so often..

      pretty good if you say you're not a rapper.. you have the complexity down iight and the flows pretty on key...
      SpurattiK

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      • #4
        Pretty damn good for a non-rapper rookie, keep doing this stuff!

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        • #5
          Thanks!! I dont actually rap and record u know? I battle my friends online sometimes and they just laugh cuz and they keep sayin im real good. thanks thou. They want me to write a song and actually record it too.
          "Victims, aren't we all?" -Brandon Lee (The Crow)

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          • #6
            dont think your good enough for recordin yet bro but keep trying
            UNDERDOGG ARMY

            suups-----nooby_shady----hydro 101

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            • #7
              i know i aint good enough for recording
              "Victims, aren't we all?" -Brandon Lee (The Crow)

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              • #8
                [smartass]Everybody is good enough for recording...not everyone´s good enough for sellign though [/smartass]

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by DustiDue
                  [smartass]Everybody is good enough for recording...not everyone´s good enough for sellign though [/smartass]
                  cool il give you that 1 lol ^
                  UNDERDOGG ARMY

                  suups-----nooby_shady----hydro 101

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